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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:48 pm

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Post  Rizzo Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:48 pm

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LaydeeLyca wrote:Lmao yh Carnell is with u too dats y ur so damn angry. Yh Gloria IS sweet...4 NOW!! Wink Very Happy Cool


OHHH SHIT ! I'M SCARED OF THAT ! NOT REALLY BUT I FEEL BAD FOR WHAT COULD POSSIBLY TO CARNELL OR MYSELF ... : (
GLORIA SOUND CRAZY NOW !

LMAO hahaha naw don't worry she ain't gonna hurt u coz she's got no reason 2 hate u....but Carnell, well I guess ur gonna have 2 wait & find out wat she will do 2 him!! Evil or Very Mad
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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:50 pm

WHY DO CARNELL BE BEATIN' ON GLORIA LIKE THAT ANYWAYS ? HE'S JUST DISFUNCTIONAL AS HELL ! ACTIN' RECKLESS ... GLORIA SHOULD HAVE SMACKED THE HELL OUTTA HIM ! OR TOOK A LEASSON AND WATCHED SOME MADEA ! LOL

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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:51 pm

LaydeeLyca wrote:
yoface718x wrote:
LaydeeLyca wrote:Lmao yh Carnell is with u too dats y ur so damn angry. Yh Gloria IS sweet...4 NOW!! Wink Very Happy Cool


OHHH SHIT ! I'M SCARED OF THAT ! NOT REALLY BUT I FEEL BAD FOR WHAT COULD POSSIBLY TO CARNELL OR MYSELF ... : (
GLORIA SOUND CRAZY NOW !

LMAO hahaha naw don't worry she ain't gonna hurt u coz she's got no reason 2 hate u....but Carnell, well I guess ur gonna have 2 wait & find out wat she will do 2 him!! Evil or Very Mad


OHH ... OKAY ...


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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:51 pm

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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:52 pm

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I FINALLY QUOTED MYSELF ON THIS POST ... TODAY ... Embarassed Cool
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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:53 pm

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*walks past, see's story and stops*
"Hmmm."
*grabs red paint*


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Cool


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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:53 pm

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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:54 pm

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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:54 pm

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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:54 pm

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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:55 pm

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PAGE TENN !!!!!!



UPDAAAAATE !!!!!!!


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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:56 pm

THAT TOOK A VERY LOOOONNGG TIME ! Laughing Laughing Laughing
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Post  Rizzo Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:57 pm

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THAT TOOK A VERY LOOOONNGG TIME ! Laughing Laughing Laughing

lolz THANX A LOT LISHA!! I'm 'bout 2 post it in a few minutes coz I gotta edit it & make sure it all makes sense etc.
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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 1:24 pm

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THAT TOOK A VERY LOOOONNGG TIME ! Laughing Laughing Laughing

lolz THANX A LOT LISHA!! I'm 'bout 2 post it in a few minutes coz I gotta edit it & make sure it all makes sense etc.


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Post  Rizzo Fri Aug 22, 2008 1:26 pm

Chapter 4 ~ Confusion~


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I had to get out of there fast coz Alishia seemed like she was starting to figure out that I am with Gloria. I needed to go somewhere to just clear my head so I decided to go to the best place I could think off, which is my older brother Dustin’s house. Dustin use to be Gloria’s best friend and I think he was feeling her but I guess he didn’t wanna step to her coz they were best friends so then I made my move and got with her two years ago. I also made sure that Gloria wouldn’t see Dustin anymore coz I felt insecure and I was scared if Gloria would cheat on me or even worse leave me for Dustin.

I know that what I did was wrong though and I can’t justify what I did, and I guess I’ve done to Gloria exactly what I didn’t want her doing to me. I know I’ve messed up big time but I just can’t stop doing what I do, I guess it’s coz in the past before I even met Gloria, every single girl I got with seemed sweet at first but then they’d turn out to be devils in disguise and they’d take all my money and everything, cheat on me and eventually leave me. When I first got with Gloria, I felt that she was the one and I wanted to spend the rest of my life with her but then something just clicked in my head that she would probably leave me coz she was too damn friendly with Dustin.

I guess Gloria was the victim of my revenge, I never meant to hurt her much though. I need some advice or something from Dustin. I stepped out of my car once I had reached Dustin’s place. I walked towards the door and then I knocked twice, I hope he’s home. He must be coz it’s only 11 am in the morning so I don’t think he’s gone anywhere. I stepped back and was ‘bout to go but then the door opened and I saw Dustin standing there, he moved out of my way and let me in. I walked into the living room and sat down on one of the sofas.
“So what you doing here so early?” Dustin asked me as he sat on the arm of the sofa.


"What I can't visit my own brother?" I asked sarcastically and I laughed a little and Dustin did the same. "So what's up with you?" Dustin asked. “I messed up Dustin, I messed up and I don’t know how to fix it” I said as I put my head in the palms of my hands. “What you talkin’ ‘bout man? Has this got something to do with Gloria?” Dustin asked, raising his eyebrow slightly. I lifted my head from my hands and nodded my head.



“Sh.it, Carnell what the f.uck is wrong with you. First you stop me and Gloria from seeing each other for some dumba.ss reason that only God knows, and then you cheat on her. Now what?” Dustin said with an angry tone as he moved to sit down properly on the sofa. “I don’t know what to do now, I do love Gloria. I really do, but I-” I said but then Dustin cut me off. "If you love Gloria so damn much then why are you hurting her like this?" Dustin asked as he shook his head. "I don't know why I'm doing this to her Dustin that's why I need your advice." I said.



“You know what Carnell, there’s something you need to know ‘bout Gloria. It’s something that happened two years ago, but I’m sure she didn’t tell you did she?” Dustin asked. What is he talking about, Gloria has told me everything about her, but I didn’t know something happened to her two years ago. “What happened to her Dustin?” I asked with a confused expression. Dustin got up and walked into the kitchen, then he went to the fridge and got out two bottles of water. He handed one to me and took one for himself,then he twisted the cap of his and opened it and he took a little sip.



“Gloria nearly died two years ago just before you met her and that’s why at first she was slightly frightened of you.” Dustin said as he leaned up against the fridge. I was really shocked that Gloria nearly died, well that explains why she gets so damn jumpy around me sometimes. “So what exactly happened, did she get an illness or did someone try to kill her?” I asked with concern then I twisted the cap of my bottle of water and drank a lot of it then I gulped it down.









Sorry it was so damn short & boring but more should hopefully come 2day though,coz I wanna do a lot of updates to make up for all those times that I didn't update.


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Post  Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 2:06 pm

I-I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY TO THAT ....


UHM ..

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Post  Rizzo Fri Aug 22, 2008 3:10 pm

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I-I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY TO THAT ....


UHM ..

BUMPS !

Does that mean the update was so good that it left you speechless?? Or does it just mean that you were surprised 'bout what the update was about??
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Post  storyteller Sun Aug 24, 2008 2:45 pm

Very Happy IT'S REALLY GUD

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Post  Rizzo Sun Aug 24, 2008 2:57 pm

storyteller wrote:Very Happy IT'S REALLY GUD

BUMPZ

thanx glad u like it...I will update on Tuesday tho, coz I got two other stories on da official B5 forum 2 update.
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Post  Rizzo Tue Aug 26, 2008 5:49 am

Chapter 5 ~ Revealing the truth ~


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It was 11 am in the morning and I was lying down on the couch just thinking about how much my life has changed ever since Carnell got with Gloria. I use to always be there for Gloria and I use to help her out with everything, I was her best friend and sort of like a big brother to her. But then she started liking Carnell and then everything just went wrong.


Gloria stopped hanging out with me and eventually she stopped calling me. Then everytime she would go to our Mom's house to see Carnell, she would never acknowlegde my presence even when I said 'hi' to her, she would just ignore me. I didn't know what was going on, I mean I understood that she was going out with Carnell so she had less time for me but I didn't know why she stopped talking to me in general.


Gloria and I grew apart more and more and then I just had to talk to her when we bumped into each other at the mall. At first she ignored me but then I grabbed her arm and asked her why she hadn't been talking to me lately. Then she told me about how Carnell is such an insecure control freak and he doesn't want her seeing me ever again coz he's scared of losing her to me.

So I told her to tell him that we're just friends and nothing could ever happen between use, besides if I really wanted to make a move on her I would've done that a long time ago, she told me that she had already told Carnell that but he just wouldn't listen to her. As I was lying down on the couch and about to fall asleep, I heard two knocks on the door and I was startled and confused coz I didn't know who it could possibly be, but then I realised that it might be Carnell coz he does this a lot.


At first I was gonna just ignore him coz I didn't wanna deal with his bulls.hit again coz he always comes to me complaining about his relationship with Gloria but I just didn't wanna hear it anymore. After a while I changed my mind, got up and walked over to the door then I opened the front door and I saw that Carnell was about to leave but then his face lightened up and he walked in.


He came into the living room and we talked for a while then I got up and went into the kitchen and I was gonna tell him about what happened to Gloria. "Are you talkin' 'bout when she accidentally stabbed some dude or something without knowing" Carnell asked, he seemed pretty sure that that's what I was talking about. "What she told you 'bout that?" I said hoping that she didn't tell him everything that happened that night.


"Yeah she told me 'bout that though and I was really relieved to know that the guy died" Carnell said laughing slightly, I know that he probably got some guys to get rid of the dude when he was in the hospital but Gloria doesn't know about that though. "I'm glad you was there to help her out though and comfort her...Dustin have you ever slept with Gloria before" Carnell said looking down then back up at me.


I was just about to drink some more water and then I choked on it and started coughing when he asked me if I've sleeped with her before. "You alright man?" Carnell asked me as he patted me on my back, then I cleared my throat. "Erm yeah man I'm cool" I said feeling a little hot and bothered. I don't know if I should tell Carnell that I slept with Gloria that night coz Carnell got issues and he gets real jealous easily though.


I also don't want Gloria to be hurt coz I know he probably beats her sometimes and I've tried to get him to stop but he just won't listen.









I'LL BE UPDATING MORE 2DAY THO & I'M SORRY DAT DIS ONE WAS SHORT & BORING AGAIN BUT OH WELL I JUST WANTED 2 GET IT OUT OF DA WAY!! SOOO BUMMPZZZZZ!


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Post  storyteller Tue Aug 26, 2008 4:57 pm

Damn how Carnell gon beat the shit outta her ,try to make it up then bring another girl in the house when Gloria is there thats messed up
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Post  Alishia Tue Aug 26, 2008 9:02 pm

storyteller wrote:Damn how Carnell gon beat the shit outta her ,try to make it up then bring another girl in the house when Gloria is there thats messed up
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Post  Alishia Wed Aug 27, 2008 4:02 am

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