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Post  ~Mrz.$exi~ Sun May 11, 2008 12:31 pm

INTRODUCTION


y/n- but momma i don't want to move!! Sad

y/m-i'm sorry but we don't have a choice we were transferred by our jobs and we have to go!

y/d- i'm sorry honey but your mother is right. if we don't take this transfer then we won't have a job.

y/n-what ever. Rolling Eyes

cody-hey well on the bright side my girl lives where we're moving Very Happy

y/n-oh shut up!

my name is y/m/n and i am 15 yrs old. my life was perfect until my parents job was transferred. i had the perfect life with a not so perfect brother, friends, the best boyfriend anygirl could have, and the most loving parents. but now riding down this highway. my life is nothing but confused.

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comment! and i'll update!


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Post  Rizzo Sun May 11, 2008 12:46 pm

Oooooo I'm luvin' this! I WANNA BE IN IT! Very Happy
Name: Rosie
Nickname: Rizzo
Pic: if u need one just let me know!
Personality: funny, laid back, kind, always got my friends back, helpful, gives great advice, hlaf girly and half tomboyish!
Man: KELLY! ( sorry I 4got to say dat earlier ym bad I kinda 4got lol)

BUMP IT UP!
*sings* baby turn around & let me see that next update so we can BUMP BUMP BUMP!! that is all I wanna reeeead so baby show meee! lol

BUMPZ BUMPZ BUMPZ
BUMPZ BUMPZ BUMPZ
BUMPZ BUMPZ BUMPZ
BUMPZ BUMPZ BUMPZ
BUMPZ BUMPZ BUMPZ
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Post  Rizzo Sun May 11, 2008 12:48 pm

Since ur story is the first...it has been giving a sticky now! Very Happy Cool Wink
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Post  ~Mrz.$exi~ Sun May 11, 2008 1:00 pm

who you want your man to be?
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Post  B5lover10 Sun May 11, 2008 1:07 pm

Name:Janice
Nickname:JanJan
Mann:Carnell,Bryan or Patrick
Personality:ghetto,funny,nice,loud,outgoing,stand up for what I believe
Pic-let me know if you need it
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Post  B5lover10 Sun May 11, 2008 1:09 pm

I lke it! Very Happy

Update!!!!

Ima start a story soon but not today I have 5stroies alreayd on the other forum ahah and I ain't even keeping up with them.
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Post  Rizzo Sun May 11, 2008 1:13 pm

B5lover10 wrote:I lke it! Very Happy

Update!!!!

Ima start a story soon but not today I have 5stroies alreayd on the other forum ahah and I ain't even keeping up with them.

Well start the story whenever u feel like it...if u quick enuf it can get a sticky coz dere are 2 more sticky's left 2 be given! Very Happy Cool BUMP IT!
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Post  Rizzo Sun May 11, 2008 1:16 pm

Can u plz make ur cast call in da 'cast calls' section on da forum plz! THANK U! coz it would be helpful if we all followed da rules & kept da forum simple & easy 2 use! U can move da cast call part of ur story urself to the cast call section of the forum or I can move it 4 u ok.


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Post  B5lover10 Sun May 11, 2008 1:17 pm

LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:I lke it! Very Happy

Update!!!!

Ima start a story soon but not today I have 5stroies alreayd on the other forum ahah and I ain't even keeping up with them.

Well start the story whenever u feel like it...if u quick enuf it can get a sticky coz dere are 2 more sticky's left 2 be given! Very Happy Cool BUMP IT!

oh ok!

but like I have to think of soething cuz like..have you ever read any of my stories in the other forum??
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Post  Rizzo Sun May 11, 2008 1:20 pm

B5lover10 wrote:
LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:I lke it! Very Happy

Update!!!!

Ima start a story soon but not today I have 5stroies alreayd on the other forum ahah and I ain't even keeping up with them.

Well start the story whenever u feel like it...if u quick enuf it can get a sticky coz dere are 2 more sticky's left 2 be given! Very Happy Cool BUMP IT!


oh ok!

but like I have to think of soething cuz like..have you ever read any of my stories in the other forum??

ok den...erm I dunno, maybe I've read ur stories but I'm not sure coz I don't have a good memory lol
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Post  B5lover10 Sun May 11, 2008 1:22 pm

LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:
LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:I lke it! Very Happy

Update!!!!

Ima start a story soon but not today I have 5stroies alreayd on the other forum ahah and I ain't even keeping up with them.

Well start the story whenever u feel like it...if u quick enuf it can get a sticky coz dere are 2 more sticky's left 2 be given! Very Happy Cool BUMP IT!


oh ok!

but like I have to think of soething cuz like..have you ever read any of my stories in the other forum??

ok den...erm I dunno, maybe I've read ur stories but I'm not sure coz I don't have a good memory lol

lol I don't think you have though you should check out one of themm though here's the names:

"I gotta get her","Love at first sight","Will it last","What does it take?","I think Im sprungg"

go read one!
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Post  Rizzo Sun May 11, 2008 1:25 pm

B5lover10 wrote:
LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:
LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:I lke it! Very Happy

Update!!!!

Ima start a story soon but not today I have 5stroies alreayd on the other forum ahah and I ain't even keeping up with them.

Well start the story whenever u feel like it...if u quick enuf it can get a sticky coz dere are 2 more sticky's left 2 be given! Very Happy Cool BUMP IT!


oh ok!

but like I have to think of soething cuz like..have you ever read any of my stories in the other forum??

ok den...erm I dunno, maybe I've read ur stories but I'm not sure coz I don't have a good memory lol

lol I don't think you have though you should check out one of themm though here's the names:

"I gotta get her","Love at first sight","Will it last","What does it take?","I think Im sprungg"

go read one!

A'ight I'll read one 2morrow or all of dem, den bump & comment dem too. coz right now I'm tryna do my homework & it will take a loooooong time lol
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Post  B5lover10 Sun May 11, 2008 1:26 pm

LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:
LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:
LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:I lke it! Very Happy

Update!!!!

Ima start a story soon but not today I have 5stroies alreayd on the other forum ahah and I ain't even keeping up with them.

Well start the story whenever u feel like it...if u quick enuf it can get a sticky coz dere are 2 more sticky's left 2 be given! Very Happy Cool BUMP IT!




oh ok!

but like I have to think of soething cuz like..have you ever read any of my stories in the other forum??

ok den...erm I dunno, maybe I've read ur stories but I'm not sure coz I don't have a good memory lol

lol I don't think you have though you should check out one of themm though here's the names:

"I gotta get her","Love at first sight","Will it last","What does it take?","I think Im sprungg"

go read one!

A'ight I'll read one 2morrow or all of dem, den bump & comment dem too. coz right now I'm tryna do my homework & it will take a loooooong time lol

alrighty!
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Post  Tinkerbell011 Sun May 11, 2008 1:43 pm

starting stories without telling people thats ok lol
i so want dustin Very Happy

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Post  B5lover10 Sun May 11, 2008 1:44 pm

Tinkerbell011 wrote:starting stories without telling people thats ok lol
i so want dustin Very Happy


lol

wow when did you start liking Dizzy??

i thought u liked Kelly
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Post  Tinkerbell011 Sun May 11, 2008 2:18 pm

B5lover10 wrote:
Tinkerbell011 wrote:starting stories without telling people thats ok lol
i so want dustin Very Happy


lol

wow when did you start liking Dizzy??

i thought u liked Kelly

i like them both

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Post  ~Mrz.$exi~ Sun May 11, 2008 2:21 pm

Tinkerbell011 wrote:starting stories without telling people thats ok lol
i so want dustin Very Happy
i'm sorry girl!! i forgot!!my bad but imma make sure you get Dustin!
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Post  B5lover10 Sun May 11, 2008 2:58 pm

BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post  ~Mrz.$exi~ Sun May 11, 2008 8:00 pm


CHAPTER 1

Y/N's P.O.V

*ONE WEEK LATER*

Dear Diary,
omg i am soo happy that we moved now!! we live next to one of mom's old college friends that has 5 boys!! all of them fine but i really have my eye on one specific one. his name is carnell I love you . but he already has a girlfriend named Janice but we call her JanJan!! i heard from mine and her bestfriend(well my newly bff) Shawna that she is supposed to be moving and hasn't told Nellz yet!! but yea. we start school on monday!! and i CAN wait!!well 2day is Friday and my parents have gone on a trip and i have to spend the night at the Breeding's house! we've planned to play a trick on Carnell and have his mom take my mom's car and almost run him over but imma run and push him on his lawn and make him think i'm dead for a min! its gonna be soo funny! well i g2g
love ya- y/n!


the plan is in full action Carnell is starting to walk home and i see his mom. hold up why is he stopping. oh tying his shoe! even better.

y/n-nell watch out!!
he stood there like a deer in headlights!! so i started running across and pushed him right over right b4 Mrs. Breedign passed.

Nell's P.O.V

omg i can't believe what just happened! i almost got ran over! but y/n saved my life! wow i am soo thank ful

nell-y/n thanks for saving my life!! Embarassed i don't know what i would do without you!!.

i looked at y/n and she didn't move so i started shanking her and she still didn't move!

nell-omg she has been here for only a week and i've already killed her!! Shocked

i dashed inside and there was Bryan sitting on the couch looking out the window..

bry-omg what just happened?Neutral

nell-u saw everything. then go get mom. stupid!

i ran back outside and my mom follow me

mrs. b- Shocked god Carnell she has only been herfe a week and you've already killed her!!

i neeled next to her as everybody else came outside.

nell- Crying or Very sad no don't die!! plz i need you.

right after i said that she started laughing...

nell-your alive

y/n- always have been!!

everybody started laughing execpt nell of course!!

nell-man that ain't funny!!!

y/n-hey it was your moms idea.

mrs. b-actually the whole mastermind behind this plan is your mom y/n!

y/n-nu un . my mom plan something like that!!!

y/n-o.k *oh sh.it where in the world am i gonna sleep i mean i don't know them that well. what if one of them tries to make a move on me??
even they don't know it i saw Bryan and Carnel just high-five each other. *

Bry-why u lookin like u just got killed in Gears of War???

nells-Shut up Bry!!

mrs. b- yall go to yalls room and get ready for bed it's late!!

Bry-it's only 8 P.M.!

mrs. b-thats right my watch is set wrong, it says 12 a.m.

e/b just started laughing.



whats gonna happen..............

comment so i can update more!
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Post  B5lover10 Sun May 11, 2008 8:45 pm

I liked the plann!

aww im moving noooooooooooooo.

iloveyou Nellz<3

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Post  Rizzo Mon May 12, 2008 12:56 pm

hahaahaha dat was so funny! Mrs B is too funny hahahahaa...Carnell seems like he was 'bout 2 have a heart attack or cry...damn da boy just can't take a damn joke, he took it all too seriously!
*sings* baby turn around & let me see that next update so we can BUMP BUMP BUMP!! that is all I wanna reeeead so baby show meee! lol

BUMPZ BUMPZ BUMPZ
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Post  B5lover10 Mon May 12, 2008 1:20 pm

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im lovin it!!!

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Post  Tippy Thu May 15, 2008 1:16 pm

lmao if Ms.B planned something like that I'd be dying lmao. and everybody know Kelly is mine Twisted Evil lol skittles, man wheere's Tae at? did everyone move here or what? the world is coming to an end Crying or Very sad oh well skittles it!!!

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Post  B5lover10 Thu May 15, 2008 5:35 pm

bumpz!
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Post  Rizzo Fri May 16, 2008 12:49 pm

*sings* baby turn around & let me see that next update so we can BUMP BUMP BUMP!! that is all I wanna reeeead so baby show meee! lol

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