Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Chapter 10 ~Conflicts~
Rosie always comes to visit us like everyday coz she is so bored at home since she has no one to talk to. So she came over to talk to us this morning and then we went to the kitchen and whilst I made some hashbrowns and fried some chicken, Rosie made some shrimps with lobster and salmon. At first, Patrick was telling her that she shouldn’t even lift a finger coz she’s pregnant but then Rosie said that she is only 3 months pregnant and she’s not even really showing yet.
Hmm I wonder if Patrick will treat me the same when I get pregnant, I mean he has to right…Rosie went over to switch on the radio in the kitchen and we started doing our two step and then Beyoncé’s song ‘Single Ladies (Put A Ring On It)’ came on and we started singing along to it and doing the same dance that was in the music video.
We were interrupted when the doorbell started ringing and I couldn't open the door myself coz I was busy so I asked if Patrick could open the door. He was in the living room and was watching MTV, and had Lil Wayne and Bobby Valentino’s song ‘Mrs Officer’ blasting from the TV. “PATRICK!!OPEN THE DOOR DAMMIT!!” I yelled at the top of my lungs as I switched my walk and started to walk out of the kitchen and into the living room and as I approached Patrick, I could tell that by the look on his face he knew that I was hella mad. He then grabbed the remote and turned down the volume, he looked quite surprised that I was mad at him.
“What’s wrong baby, why you shouting at me like I did something wrong?” he asked getting up from the couch and walking towards me, when he finally got to me he grabbed my waist and pulled me closer to him and then he gently moved my hair from out of my face. Then he touched my chin softly and pulled my face closer to his and just as he was about to kiss me…Rosie came out the kitchen.
“DANG JAN, first you yell at Patrick for not opening the damn door and then you’re up in here all over him, goshhh.” Rosie said, and then she rolled her eyes when she said ‘gosh’ and she stormed over to the door and swung it open. She looked really shocked and then her shocked expression changed to an angry one. I wondered what was going on so I removed Patrick’s hands from around my waist and I made my way to the door. As I got closer, I realised the person standing there is Alishia's boyfriend, Tyrese.
“Can I come in?” Tyrese asked waiting for our approval. Rosie looked like she was gonna explode, her face had turned red and she looked like she could spit fire. “I have every right to just slam this door right in your face. As a matter of fact, I could just slap you right now you-…” I had to cut her off before she got out of hand by telling Patrick to take her away from Ty, and so Patrick did as he was told and pulled her away and she was still running her mouth and then she went back to the kitchen probably to cool off.
Tyrese walked in and then he sat down on the couch and at first there was nothing but silence and then we heard Rosie shouting whilst she was talking on the phone. Damn the person that she’s talking to must be really hard of hearing. Rosie then went upstairs and the silence was restored.
“So erm is Alishia here yet?” Tyrese asked with his head down and then he looked back up. “No she’s not here yet, I guess she changed her mind and decided not to come after all.” I said lying, and hoping that she wouldn’t come here anytime soon. It stayed quiet for a little while longer and then I received a text from Rosie, telling me that ‘Alishia can’t make it coz she doesn’t wanna see Ty.’ So then Rosie came down the stairs and said her goodbyes, she gave Patrick and I a kiss on the cheek, but she just rolled her eyes and kissed her teeth when she passed Tyrese.
I guess Rosie STILL hasn’t forgiven Tyrese for what he did to her when they were back in High School. She tried so hard to warn Alishia about Ty’s past but I guess as the saying goes ‘Love Is Blind’ and so Alishia never listened to Rosie but I bet she wishes she did now.
I know this was a boring upd8 but oh well at least I updated tho…I have to continue doing my homework ryte not BUT if I finish early then I will continue Janice’s P.O.V then Alishia, then me or someone else.
Rosie always comes to visit us like everyday coz she is so bored at home since she has no one to talk to. So she came over to talk to us this morning and then we went to the kitchen and whilst I made some hashbrowns and fried some chicken, Rosie made some shrimps with lobster and salmon. At first, Patrick was telling her that she shouldn’t even lift a finger coz she’s pregnant but then Rosie said that she is only 3 months pregnant and she’s not even really showing yet.
Hmm I wonder if Patrick will treat me the same when I get pregnant, I mean he has to right…Rosie went over to switch on the radio in the kitchen and we started doing our two step and then Beyoncé’s song ‘Single Ladies (Put A Ring On It)’ came on and we started singing along to it and doing the same dance that was in the music video.
We were interrupted when the doorbell started ringing and I couldn't open the door myself coz I was busy so I asked if Patrick could open the door. He was in the living room and was watching MTV, and had Lil Wayne and Bobby Valentino’s song ‘Mrs Officer’ blasting from the TV. “PATRICK!!OPEN THE DOOR DAMMIT!!” I yelled at the top of my lungs as I switched my walk and started to walk out of the kitchen and into the living room and as I approached Patrick, I could tell that by the look on his face he knew that I was hella mad. He then grabbed the remote and turned down the volume, he looked quite surprised that I was mad at him.
“What’s wrong baby, why you shouting at me like I did something wrong?” he asked getting up from the couch and walking towards me, when he finally got to me he grabbed my waist and pulled me closer to him and then he gently moved my hair from out of my face. Then he touched my chin softly and pulled my face closer to his and just as he was about to kiss me…Rosie came out the kitchen.
“DANG JAN, first you yell at Patrick for not opening the damn door and then you’re up in here all over him, goshhh.” Rosie said, and then she rolled her eyes when she said ‘gosh’ and she stormed over to the door and swung it open. She looked really shocked and then her shocked expression changed to an angry one. I wondered what was going on so I removed Patrick’s hands from around my waist and I made my way to the door. As I got closer, I realised the person standing there is Alishia's boyfriend, Tyrese.
“Can I come in?” Tyrese asked waiting for our approval. Rosie looked like she was gonna explode, her face had turned red and she looked like she could spit fire. “I have every right to just slam this door right in your face. As a matter of fact, I could just slap you right now you-…” I had to cut her off before she got out of hand by telling Patrick to take her away from Ty, and so Patrick did as he was told and pulled her away and she was still running her mouth and then she went back to the kitchen probably to cool off.
Tyrese walked in and then he sat down on the couch and at first there was nothing but silence and then we heard Rosie shouting whilst she was talking on the phone. Damn the person that she’s talking to must be really hard of hearing. Rosie then went upstairs and the silence was restored.
“So erm is Alishia here yet?” Tyrese asked with his head down and then he looked back up. “No she’s not here yet, I guess she changed her mind and decided not to come after all.” I said lying, and hoping that she wouldn’t come here anytime soon. It stayed quiet for a little while longer and then I received a text from Rosie, telling me that ‘Alishia can’t make it coz she doesn’t wanna see Ty.’ So then Rosie came down the stairs and said her goodbyes, she gave Patrick and I a kiss on the cheek, but she just rolled her eyes and kissed her teeth when she passed Tyrese.
I guess Rosie STILL hasn’t forgiven Tyrese for what he did to her when they were back in High School. She tried so hard to warn Alishia about Ty’s past but I guess as the saying goes ‘Love Is Blind’ and so Alishia never listened to Rosie but I bet she wishes she did now.
I know this was a boring upd8 but oh well at least I updated tho…I have to continue doing my homework ryte not BUT if I finish early then I will continue Janice’s P.O.V then Alishia, then me or someone else.
Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Ooooo me and Patrick was gonna kiss; DAMN YOU ROSIE !!!! lmao
you just had to walk in.
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you just had to walk in.
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Aaaah Ty got sum CHEEEK cumin up in Janice's yard to ask for Alishia, he need to back off!
OOOO i wander wut kemistry is happenin wit Shad && alishia tho, seemed like luv at first sight man, buh not really cuz they obviosly met b4.
Hahaa, && Pat makes me laugh, such a damn doofus he didnt hear d doorbell.
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OOOO i wander wut kemistry is happenin wit Shad && alishia tho, seemed like luv at first sight man, buh not really cuz they obviosly met b4.
Hahaa, && Pat makes me laugh, such a damn doofus he didnt hear d doorbell.
BUMP THIS UP CHICA!
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Chapter 11 ~Affection PART 1~
When Rosie left, I just felt so sorry for Tyrese. He looked so sad, and I really felt for him though because he had no one, I know that he deserve to be hurting like this, just like he hurt Rosie AND Alishia but every person deserves a second chance right?...I guess maybe I’m just being too nice and thoughtful. Patrick snapped me out of my thoughts when he nudged me a little. “Baby do you like him or something coz you’ve been staring at him ever since he got here?” Patrick asked me, he seemed a little aggravated but I could tell that he was trying to control his anger.
“Patrick now why the f.uck would I ever like him when I got someone as fine as you.” then I started laughing and he laughed too, I guess that got him to calm down. “Yeah I know I’m the sexiest guy alive.” Patrick said as he popped his collar and checked himself out in the mirror in the living room. I couldn’t help but laugh at him though. “Patrick you look good but not that good.” I said just to see his reaction. He frowned his eyebrows and he looked like he was getting angry.
“Oh but if Ty said that you would probably agree right?” Patrick yelled getting all up in my face. I can’t believe he thinks I like Tyrese, I thought he was joking before but I guess he’s serious now. Tyrese walked over to Patrick and pulled him aside slightly. “Look little man, you ain’t gotta be mad at Janice like that, she’s a good woman and trust me I know that she definitely doesn’t like me like that coz I've hurt way too many girls and she knows it.” Tyrese said looking down at Patrick. His 6’4 well-built frame made Patrick look tiny compared to him; Patrick looked offended when he called him a little man. “Little…who the f.uck is you calling little?” Patrick said as he was about to punch Tyrese but Ty stopped him and he just put his hands up and started backing up towards the front door.
“I just came here to get my girl, not to fight someone…Janice if Alishia DOES come over here, then please let me know ok...” Tyrese then paused for a little and then he continued. “But if she doesn’t wanna see me which she probably doesn’t but just let her know that I really do love her and I’m sorry for treating her like that, I just hope it’s not too late coz I already messed up in the past with Rosie and I don’t wanna do it again with Alishia coz she means a lot to me and I don’t wanna lose her.” He said it like he really meant it, what he said brought tears to my eyes; he then opened the door and walked out.
I looked over at Patrick and he was sitting down on one of the steps of the stairs with his head down, I walked over to him. I ran my fingers through his hair and then he looked up at me. I slightly smiled at him and then I kissed him passionately, he then pulled me closer to him and I started to tug at his shirt and he then slipped his tongue into my mouth and the kiss got more intense. We pulled away from each other and then he looked at me and he smiled at me and started pulling me by my hand slowly up the stairs. We went into our bedroom and he started kissing me again and then we parted our lips for a few seconds and I took off my skirt and he unzipped his trousers…He grabbed me and pinned me down to the bed and he removed my bra and he just admired my body and then he slightly grinned and licked his lips…damn we ain’t done this in a while but I’m sure gonna enjoy this though.
I wrote dis upd8 real quick soooo I will continue it 2moz & da P.O.V after it is Alishia's ok...soo BUMPPP & COMMENT!!
When Rosie left, I just felt so sorry for Tyrese. He looked so sad, and I really felt for him though because he had no one, I know that he deserve to be hurting like this, just like he hurt Rosie AND Alishia but every person deserves a second chance right?...I guess maybe I’m just being too nice and thoughtful. Patrick snapped me out of my thoughts when he nudged me a little. “Baby do you like him or something coz you’ve been staring at him ever since he got here?” Patrick asked me, he seemed a little aggravated but I could tell that he was trying to control his anger.
“Patrick now why the f.uck would I ever like him when I got someone as fine as you.” then I started laughing and he laughed too, I guess that got him to calm down. “Yeah I know I’m the sexiest guy alive.” Patrick said as he popped his collar and checked himself out in the mirror in the living room. I couldn’t help but laugh at him though. “Patrick you look good but not that good.” I said just to see his reaction. He frowned his eyebrows and he looked like he was getting angry.
“Oh but if Ty said that you would probably agree right?” Patrick yelled getting all up in my face. I can’t believe he thinks I like Tyrese, I thought he was joking before but I guess he’s serious now. Tyrese walked over to Patrick and pulled him aside slightly. “Look little man, you ain’t gotta be mad at Janice like that, she’s a good woman and trust me I know that she definitely doesn’t like me like that coz I've hurt way too many girls and she knows it.” Tyrese said looking down at Patrick. His 6’4 well-built frame made Patrick look tiny compared to him; Patrick looked offended when he called him a little man. “Little…who the f.uck is you calling little?” Patrick said as he was about to punch Tyrese but Ty stopped him and he just put his hands up and started backing up towards the front door.
“I just came here to get my girl, not to fight someone…Janice if Alishia DOES come over here, then please let me know ok...” Tyrese then paused for a little and then he continued. “But if she doesn’t wanna see me which she probably doesn’t but just let her know that I really do love her and I’m sorry for treating her like that, I just hope it’s not too late coz I already messed up in the past with Rosie and I don’t wanna do it again with Alishia coz she means a lot to me and I don’t wanna lose her.” He said it like he really meant it, what he said brought tears to my eyes; he then opened the door and walked out.
I looked over at Patrick and he was sitting down on one of the steps of the stairs with his head down, I walked over to him. I ran my fingers through his hair and then he looked up at me. I slightly smiled at him and then I kissed him passionately, he then pulled me closer to him and I started to tug at his shirt and he then slipped his tongue into my mouth and the kiss got more intense. We pulled away from each other and then he looked at me and he smiled at me and started pulling me by my hand slowly up the stairs. We went into our bedroom and he started kissing me again and then we parted our lips for a few seconds and I took off my skirt and he unzipped his trousers…He grabbed me and pinned me down to the bed and he removed my bra and he just admired my body and then he slightly grinned and licked his lips…damn we ain’t done this in a while but I’m sure gonna enjoy this though.
I wrote dis upd8 real quick soooo I will continue it 2moz & da P.O.V after it is Alishia's ok...soo BUMPPP & COMMENT!!
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I wander if Ty really DOES mean wut he sayin tho. The mystery goes on.
&& mmmmm can't w8 for tha nxt upd8 tho, lookz like Jan && Pat finally bout ta get their freak on, yeah-yah!
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&& mmmmm can't w8 for tha nxt upd8 tho, lookz like Jan && Pat finally bout ta get their freak on, yeah-yah!
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Oh wow first Patrick's mad then he's happy then he's mad again then he's all happy and sexual !
I think this ni99a's bi-polar !!!!
But at ;east we got our freak on im happy bout that one; lol
Damnnn i could imagining kissing Patrick tooo; mmmm
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I think this ni99a's bi-polar !!!!
But at ;east we got our freak on im happy bout that one; lol
Damnnn i could imagining kissing Patrick tooo; mmmm
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wow.... everybody in that house got
some MAJOR issues. wtf is pat's problem.
if he ain't bi-polar he definitely got a
lil green guy on his shoulder named envy.
what did ty do to rosie?
what happened between myself and shad?
i really like that lil smiley.
lmao anyways! i understand that ty is a lil
sad right now but he's definitely on bitch mode right
now. and he needs to leave me alone. if i still wanted him
i would still be with him, right?
some MAJOR issues. wtf is pat's problem.
if he ain't bi-polar he definitely got a
lil green guy on his shoulder named envy.
what did ty do to rosie?
what happened between myself and shad?
i really like that lil smiley.
lmao anyways! i understand that ty is a lil
sad right now but he's definitely on bitch mode right
now. and he needs to leave me alone. if i still wanted him
i would still be with him, right?
Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
yoface718x wrote:wow.... everybody in that house got
some MAJOR issues. wtf is pat's problem.
if he ain't bi-polar he definitely got a
lil green guy on his shoulder named envy.
what did ty do to rosie?
what happened between myself and shad?
i really like that lil smiley.
lmao anyways! i understand that ty is a lil
sad right now but he's definitely on bitch mode right
now. and he needs to leave me alone. if i still wanted him
i would still be with him, right?
Omg; when you type it's alll decent too me; lol
Now can you go update pleaseeee :]
Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
B5lover10 wrote:Omg; when you type it's alll decent too me; lol
Now can you go update pleaseeee :][/color][/size][/b]
i can't update untill i
write the update and
i don't have this one
written yet cause i
don't have any ideas
for it yet. well i have
the idea but i don't know
how to put it into words
though. sooo when i write
in my book i will definitely
post.
bumps!
Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
yoface718x wrote:B5lover10 wrote:Omg; when you type it's alll decent too me; lol
Now can you go update pleaseeee :][/color][/size][/b]
i can't update untill i
write the update and
i don't have this one
written yet cause i
don't have any ideas
for it yet. well i have
the idea but i don't know
how to put it into words
though. sooo when i write
in my book i will definitely
post.
bumps!
Okayyy .... : (
Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Sorry I haven't updated but I was just stressed out 'bout my exams, dey'll be starting on Monday and it'll be for 2 weeks tho. But erm I will try 2 upd8 2day tho, just b4 I continue studying. But thanx 4 all da bumpz tho & Alishia u HAVE 2 upd8 and YOU TOOOO JANICE!!
Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
LaydeeLyca wrote:Sorry I haven't updated but I was just stressed out 'bout my exams, dey'll be starting on Monday and it'll be for 2 weeks tho. But erm I will try 2 upd8 2day tho, just b4 I continue studying. But thanx 4 all da bumpz tho & Alishia u HAVE 2 upd8 and YOU TOOOO JANICE!!
i am going to update soon as my writers block is over!
i promise!
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
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