Re: [hiatus]Cherry Pie [2two]

B5lover10 Sun Nov 16, 2008 1:49 pm

yoface718x wrote:
LaydeeLyca wrote:lmfao YAYYYYY seee I guess I wasn't COMPLETELY wrong...& I'm glad dat our comments & suggestions are helpful yayyyyyy u're gonna upd8 soon whooooo hoooo lolz

lmao.yeha they do help alot.
readers make better writers.
i just made that up
lol but i'm updating now.
have you been on my forum yet
this weekend?
i have a story on there too
in the short stories section.
it's called *__Hey Diary.

Which forum ?!

Alishia Sun Nov 16, 2008 1:59 pm

B5lover10 wrote:
Which forum ?!

http://kingexx.darkbb.com/forum.htm

the url title is stupid
and i haven't come up with
anything creative for a title
so i will change it constantly
untill i like it enough to make
it the official forum name.
lol. but i started it like two
weeks ago so it's still in the
baby stages. lol

B5lover10 Sun Nov 16, 2008 2:43 pm

yoface718x wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:
Which forum ?!

http://kingexx.darkbb.com/forum.htm

the url title is stupid
and i haven't come up with
anything creative for a title
so i will change it constantly
untill i like it enough to make
it the official forum name.
lol. but i started it like two
weeks ago so it's still in the
baby stages. lol

Im hurt youuu didn't tell me when youuu first made it ! Crying or Very sad

Can I be a mod though ?!

Alishia Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:15 pm

B5lover10 wrote:
Im hurt youuu didn't tell me when youuu first made it !

Can I be a mod though ?!

i wrote it on here somewhere
so basically i let everyone who reads this, know.
but yeah, you can be a mod
:]

B5lover10 Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:19 pm

yoface718x wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:
Im hurt youuu didn't tell me when youuu first made it !

Can I be a mod though ?!

i wrote it on here somewhere
so basically i let everyone who reads this, know.
but yeah, you can be a mod
:]

Ohhh well i signed upp over thereee and i like that story "Hey Dairy" youuu should update it !

Alishia Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:38 pm

[hiatus]Cherry Pie [2two] - Page 5 Alexis10

saturday
3 pm

Dustin and the boys and I are at the park, Dustin and I are sitting on the bench watching the boys play. Their playing football with some of the other boy's from this neighborhood. It's kinda cool out. So, before we left I decided to wear some black sweat pants and a white long sleeve. The park looks so pretty in the fall because in Georgia all the trees stays green. I kinda miss the fall time in Minnesota thought. Although it got cold in September I loved the fall time because the leaves on the trees would turn bright, fiery, red, like a crimson or scarlet red. And golden yellow, like those pretty Labrador dogs. One year I saw some bright purple ones, they were almost a royal purple color. It was gorgeous.

"So how's the dance classes going?" Dustin asked me, breaking me from my peaceful thoughts. "What? Oh uhm, their going just fine. I checked my roster for my next semester classes and I'm going to be teaching Alishia's daughter, Zyahn, ballet! That should should be fun. She's already a good dancer & her talent is raw and she's hungry to learn. So it's gonna be fun, I think." I leaned into Dustin and he wrapped his arm around me and kissed my forehead.

"How's it going at the auto shop?" I asked him. He sighed and pulled me closer to him. "Babe," he took a long pause. "I got a promotion!" I looked at him and hugged him tight and kissed his lips. "Baby are you serious?!"

"Yeah! I was promoted from regular janitor to head janitor of the body shop." He said with a big smile, showing off his sexy dimples, chiseled into his sexy butterscotch face. I laughed and lightly pushed him. "You ain't funny!" He laughed and said, "I'm just kidding. But I did get a promotion. I got promoted to supervisor and assistant manager. I guess working there since high school gave me some cool points with the manager."

B5lover10 Sun Nov 16, 2008 4:01 pm

yoface718x wrote:
"Yeah! I was promoted from regular janitor to head janitor of the body shop." He said with a big smile, showing off his sexy dimples, chiseled into his sexy butterscotch face. I laughed and lightly pushed him. "You ain't funny!" He laughed and said, "I'm just kidding. But I did get a promotion. I got promoted to supervisor and assistant manager. I guess working there since high school gave me some cool points with the manager." [/color][/font]

-dies-

duuude when I read that I was like wtf ...

I liked that updateee it was short but i liked it !

Alishia Sun Nov 16, 2008 4:09 pm

B5lover10 wrote:

-dies-

duuude when I read that I was like wtf ...

I liked that updateee it was short but i liked it !

I was laughing when I wrote it.
Should I post the next update?
cause I have it written.
but that one is short too.

B5lover10 Sun Nov 16, 2008 4:12 pm

yoface718x wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:

-dies-

duuude when I read that I was like wtf ...

I liked that updateee it was short but i liked it !

I was laughing when I wrote it.
Should I post the next update?
cause I have it written.
but that one is short too.

Yeahhh youuu should post it .!

Then ill go updateee again too Very Happy

Alishia Sun Nov 16, 2008 5:15 pm

[hiatus]Cherry Pie [2two] - Page 5 Dior10

saturday
10pm

I was walking around looking for a bodega that was open. I found one on 5th ave near Jamaica Ave. I went in and went straight to the fridge and got a monster energy drink. The bell at the front of the shop went off. I looked up at the TV monitor that was over my head and saw two kids with skateboards walking around.

I closed the fridge and turned to my right. I jumped back because that girl that walked in the store had popped up. "Hi Mister," She said, "Can you do a favor for me and my friend?" I looked at her. "I what kind of favor?" I asked, emphasizing the word kind. She looked over the chip thing, outside. I followed her gaze. "See that cop car?" She asked. I nodded my head, "Yeah."

"Well I kinda told the cop in that car that you were my cousin so we wouldn't get arrested. All I need you do is let us get in your car. Then you drive us around the corner to my friends dad's house." She said. "Hell no!" I said loudly. The store owner looked up from his magazine at us. "I'm not letting to immature ass kids get in my car," I told her. "I'll pay you $60 bucks?" She pleaded pulling money out her pocket.

I silently rolled my eyes and replied. "Count it out," I said to her. She counted out the $60 in ten dollar bills. I put the money in my pocket and then we walked up to the counter together. I payed for my energy drink, the guy behind the counter put the aluminum can in a brown paper bag. I turned to the girl, "What's your name anyway?"

"Teyana."

"Dior."

B5lover10 Sun Nov 16, 2008 5:47 pm

Awwww Dior is soooo cuuute(:

Anyways ima go updateee now .!

Rizzo Wed Nov 19, 2008 11:12 am

Lmao Dustin's funny & awww I think Dior might end up getting with Teyana
BUMPPPPPP IT ALISHIA!!

B5lover10 Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:20 am

BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rizzo Mon Nov 24, 2008 8:24 am

BUMPPPPPPPPP IT ALISHIA!!...PLZZZZZ UPD8 COZ I feel like I'm having withdrawal syptoms coz u know I'm addicted 2 di story lolz

B5lover10 Mon Nov 24, 2008 3:45 pm

B5lover10 wrote:BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alishia Tue Nov 25, 2008 3:58 pm

LaydeeLyca wrote:BUMPPPPPPPPP IT ALISHIA!!...PLZZZZZ UPD8 COZ I feel like I'm having withdrawal syptoms coz u know I'm addicted 2 di story lolz

i'll update tonight after i check all my emails Very Happy

B5lover10 Tue Nov 25, 2008 8:47 pm

yoface718x wrote:
LaydeeLyca wrote:BUMPPPPPPPPP IT ALISHIA!!...PLZZZZZ UPD8 COZ I feel like I'm having withdrawal syptoms coz u know I'm addicted 2 di story lolz

i'll update tonight after i check all my emails

Yay :]

Alishia Tue Nov 25, 2008 10:32 pm

[hiatus]Cherry Pie [2two] - Page 5 Bryan10

sunday
7 am

"Come on Patricia!" I yelled from the living room of her mom's house. We were going to church and I've been up since 5 this morning. I even made her spoiled ass breakfast. I love her though, that's my wifey. I plan on marrying her one day. The one thing we have to work on is that fact that she's spoiled. She picked up that habit from getting everything from her dad all the time.

"Come on Tricia! We don't got all day!" I said. "Okay! Okay! I'm done anyways. She said coming down the stairs. I looked up and she had on a black dress with a red belt and matching accessories. It looked nice. "You look nice," I said. "Tha-" "Now let's go!" I said pulling her hand. I pulled her outside and to my car. It wasn't the greatest car. But I was proud of my clunking piece of metal. I bought with my own money after I'd passed driver's ed in 12th grade. "I hate this car!!" She said as she got in. I closed the door and got in on the driver's side.

"Be lucky I even have a car. We could be walking!" I said after I closed my door. She huffed and rolled her eyes then turned away from me and looked out the window. I started the car and drove off. It's gonna be a long Sunday.

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i know it's suuuuuuuper short
but that's all i got right now
for bryan's pov the next couple
of updates might or might not be
short i'm not totaly sure uhmmm
the bold stuff is clickable and i
will update more tomorrow. i'm
sleepy. reveiws, comments?

Alishia Thu Nov 27, 2008 3:09 pm

helloooooooo?!
i can't update untill y'all comment
and i have the updates written up already
so you mind leaving your comments?

HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!

B5lover10 Thu Nov 27, 2008 4:03 pm

Awhhh; Bryan's in loveee : ]

what tha hell when is me and Patrick gonna have some type of happy time;

or at least let it be in my point of view just to make sure im still alive, goodness !!!

NOW UPDATEEE !

BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alishia Thu Nov 27, 2008 5:00 pm

B5lover10 wrote:Awhhh; Bryan's in loveee : ]
what tha hell when is me and Patrick gonna have some type of happy time;
or at least let it be in my point of view just to make sure im still alive, goodness !!!
NOW UPDATEEE !
BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i am getting to you and patrick
it's the update after the next one
but i'm about to update.
i have to give some one a relaxer and then i'll update
:]

B5lover10 Thu Nov 27, 2008 5:30 pm

yoface718x wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:Awhhh; Bryan's in loveee : ]
what tha hell when is me and Patrick gonna have some type of happy time;
or at least let it be in my point of view just to make sure im still alive, goodness !!!
NOW UPDATEEE !
BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i am getting to you and patrick
it's the update after the next one
but i'm about to update.
i have to give some one a relaxer and then i'll update
:]

Oh alright; Yayyy !!!

you go head gurl and give that girl a relaxer !

Alishia Thu Nov 27, 2008 10:03 pm

[hiatus]Cherry Pie [2two] - Page 5 Rosie10

[rewind]
friday
1:52 am

I was sitting in my sister Charmaine and I's apartment while they were smoking & by they, I mean Charmaine and Anthony, her boyfriend. They were passing a blunt back and forth. They were on their 5th one. I stopped smoking after the third one with them, because I started getting lightheaded. I got up off the couch and went into the kitchen to find some snacks.I came upon a small bag of nacho cheese Doritos. drunken

I opened it and put my hand in the bag and then put a hand full of Doritos in my mouth. I wiped my mouth with the back of my hand as I continued chewing. Then, after I swallowed the cheesy glob of chips, I licked my fingers and put my hand back in the bag to repeat the process, when there was a loud knock on the door.

I thought I was hearing things just because I was high, so I shrugged to myself and shoved 3 more Doritos in my mouth. *BANG! BANG!* Someone Was banging on the door. "Rosie can you get the door please. Me and Ant are going to my room to finish smoking'"

"Yeah," I breathed. Then this person banged on the door again. I thought it might have been the police as loud as they were banging on the door. I started to get irritated. I had a headache starting and I was still hungry. I put the chip bag down on the counter and picked up the towel on the counter and wiped off my hands and face as I stomped to the door.

I unlocked the door and ripped it open. "What the hell is--" I was shocked by his appearance. "Kelly?" I didn't think I would see Kelly again in my wildest dreams unless I went back to Georgia. I dropped the towel on the floor and hugged him. "Oh my goodness! Kelly! I missed you so much! What are you doing here?" I let him go and stood back a little bit so he could answer my questions. I took a good look at him. He looked the same, except that he had more hair on his chin and he had a winter coat on. He looked so damned good to me. I could feel a tingly sensation start to form between my thighs.

"You told me to come and visit you, but I could drop everything and run even if I wanted too. And trust me, I wanted to. But everyone back home had to get their stuff together before I could go anywhere for anything." I took a breath and moved to the side to let him in. Charmaine came from the back and asked me who was at the door.

"It's Kelly." I said to her. He walked in and I closed the door. "Who in the hell is Kelly?" She asked. Sometimes my sister can be so damn ignorant. Rolling Eyes

"Kelly is my boyfriend from Atlanta. Well I think he's still my boyfriend. But anyways, you get my point." She went back to her room.

"Make your self comfortable, Kelly. I'll put your bags in my room." He shrugged and took off his coat as I took his bag.

---*

Kelly and I were catching up and suddenly there was loud moaning and screaming coming from the back room. I stifled a laugh and covered my mouth with my hand. Shortly after the commotion died down and there was an awkward silence. Kelly and I weren't even really out of whack. It was cool that we were still in tune after all these years. We talked about school and jobs, even kids and marriage.

"So what are you doing now Kelly?" I asked. He looked at me with his big brown bedroom eyes and told me, "Producing music." Then he licked his lips. I could feel that tingly feeling come back. I took a deep breath. Get a hold of yourself girl. After today you can all the wild sex you want. I exhaled and averted my eyes to the TV and then replied. "That's good. I'm glad to hear that your in the career you wanted." I said with a half smile. He put his hand on my thigh, and my heart jumped. I quickly looked at his hand and he snatched it back. He nodded and sat back into the plush blue couch.

We got so much to work on. Rolling Eyes

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reveiws, comments?

B5lover10 Thu Nov 27, 2008 11:19 pm

Omg; Kelly's not dead !

lol; i though he was cuz i haven't heard him in the story for a while !

Oooo; Rosie having them get freaky feelings ... lol

BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rizzo Sat Nov 29, 2008 8:34 am

Awww she's Bryan's wifey & he luvs her awww dat is soo sweeet lolz
oh goshhh I mean yh I know dat my sis is like worser than my but damn I didn't know dat she smoked & woww I smoked too, well I guess I had 2 stop coz I just couldn't handle it nemore.
mmmm nacho cheese Doritos taste real good tho, damn I haven't ate it in a while, I need 2 go 2 da store & go buy me some lolz
wow I guess I haven't got some in a longgg time den lolz ahahaahaha but Charmaine is so damn inconsiderate goshh her and Ant doing their thing in da back room
dang it seems like I really need 2 try 2 just calm down and control myself, but den again it's been so damn long since I even got any coz I had 2 be stupid & leave Atlanta.
grrr why did he have 2 stop ryte dere, goshhh we really DO have a lot 2 work on lolz
BUMPPPPP IT ALISHIA!!

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