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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Alishia Wed Aug 06, 2008 7:28 pm
are you ever gonna update this story?
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Rizzo Sat Aug 09, 2008 10:14 am
OMG my bad snap I haven't updated ANY of my stories in a while now...I am gonna update wit a triple update 2nite or 2morrow tho sooooo sorry I haven't updated 4 so long, but I've just been so busy lately but I will update soon!
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Rizzo Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:33 am
RECAP:
Chapter 2 ~ Loss Of Hope~
That all happened two years ago and the dude who made that call died a few days after, but I still fear that something bad is going to happen in my life sooner or later...hopefully later but then again who knows what will happen in life. I now have a boyfriend called Carnell and he use to always treat me right but not anymore though. He even uses me as a damn h.oe. But there's nothing that I can do about it though.
The darkness of a never ending pit, a spiral of lies and deceit. The lock and key to the gates of my soul is thrown away like a useless, old possession. The life of an underage stripper is not exactly easy; selling your body to grown men is easier than selling your soul to the man you thought you loved. They say that love should be cherished and that you cannot buy someone’s love, but they do not say that you can’t lie to someone and rip their heart out and crush all of their hopes and dreams.
I sat on the floor, holding my weed in my right hand and holding my martini in my left hand. My vision was blurred and the strong stench of the garbage was making my stomach churn. A mixture of cocaine and dried blood was at my nose, I tried to sniff up some more of the cocaine but it only made the sting of my broken nose hurt even more. I had a splitting headache that felt like as if I had been shot in the head at point blank range.
Suddenly, my so called boyfriend walked into the apartment and slammed the door behind him shut. He came rushing towards me and slapped me real hard on my left cheek and it made my body tilt to the right and my head slammed into the floor. The right side of my face felt numb and there was now blood coming out of my mouth, he looked really angry and had no remorse whatsoever for what he just did to me. I guess it’s because it’s a regular routine of his now.
“B.itch you did not just smoke my f.ucking weed” he shouted getting up in my face. I just started laughing, probably because I was so damn high. He grabbed my blouse and pulled my face closer to his, his breath smelled like he had been drinking. He always does this, he goes out then comes back late at night after going out drinking with his friends and then he takes out all his anger on me by treating me like a damn punching bag.
I knew I should’ve listened to my Mom when she told me to go and live with my aunt, but I said I wanted my freedom. My dads always use to beat my Mom up, and I hated seeing my Mom like that, so I had to leave and I promised her that I would come back and get her. But I never did get to go back coz he beat her so much that he nearly killed her and then my Mom went to live with my aunt in Canada. Carnell hated it too that my dad beat my Mom and he PROMISED me that he would NEVER lay a hand on me…but I guess that was just a lie.
“Listen b.itch if you don’t f.ucking give me back my weed. I swear I’m gonna kill you tonight.” Carnell said spitting in my face. I wiped my face and just laughed even more. “You can’t do any worse to me than you already have.” I said, with my eyes getting heavier. “You sure ‘bout that?” Carnell said as he let go of my blouse and let me drop back down to the floor. He walked away and I started to slowly crawl on the floor towards the kitchen. I thought he was gonna leave me alone as usual, but then he came back and grabbed me by my hair real tight and started dragging me across the floor, towards the bedroom.
I started crying and the tears were stinging my eyes. “Shut the f.uck up b.itch” Carnell said as he hit me for one last time...he then started ripping my clothes and put me on the bed. "Stop with the f.ucking crying and s.hit, coz I really don't give a f.uck" Carnell said without any regret, just anger. The room started spinning and everything started going dark...
My Mom is here so she won't let me write nemore coz she says I shuld be studyin'
so bumpz & comment a'ight!! 
LaydeeLyca wrote:
Suddenly, she heard the telephone ring. It went straight to the answering machine. All that could be heard, was someone breathing heavily. "It's not over Gloria" A deep, harsh voice suddenly spoke out ... "There's no where to hide"....
Chapter 2 ~ Loss Of Hope~
That all happened two years ago and the dude who made that call died a few days after, but I still fear that something bad is going to happen in my life sooner or later...hopefully later but then again who knows what will happen in life. I now have a boyfriend called Carnell and he use to always treat me right but not anymore though. He even uses me as a damn h.oe. But there's nothing that I can do about it though.
The darkness of a never ending pit, a spiral of lies and deceit. The lock and key to the gates of my soul is thrown away like a useless, old possession. The life of an underage stripper is not exactly easy; selling your body to grown men is easier than selling your soul to the man you thought you loved. They say that love should be cherished and that you cannot buy someone’s love, but they do not say that you can’t lie to someone and rip their heart out and crush all of their hopes and dreams.
I sat on the floor, holding my weed in my right hand and holding my martini in my left hand. My vision was blurred and the strong stench of the garbage was making my stomach churn. A mixture of cocaine and dried blood was at my nose, I tried to sniff up some more of the cocaine but it only made the sting of my broken nose hurt even more. I had a splitting headache that felt like as if I had been shot in the head at point blank range.
Suddenly, my so called boyfriend walked into the apartment and slammed the door behind him shut. He came rushing towards me and slapped me real hard on my left cheek and it made my body tilt to the right and my head slammed into the floor. The right side of my face felt numb and there was now blood coming out of my mouth, he looked really angry and had no remorse whatsoever for what he just did to me. I guess it’s because it’s a regular routine of his now.
“B.itch you did not just smoke my f.ucking weed” he shouted getting up in my face. I just started laughing, probably because I was so damn high. He grabbed my blouse and pulled my face closer to his, his breath smelled like he had been drinking. He always does this, he goes out then comes back late at night after going out drinking with his friends and then he takes out all his anger on me by treating me like a damn punching bag.
I knew I should’ve listened to my Mom when she told me to go and live with my aunt, but I said I wanted my freedom. My dads always use to beat my Mom up, and I hated seeing my Mom like that, so I had to leave and I promised her that I would come back and get her. But I never did get to go back coz he beat her so much that he nearly killed her and then my Mom went to live with my aunt in Canada. Carnell hated it too that my dad beat my Mom and he PROMISED me that he would NEVER lay a hand on me…but I guess that was just a lie.
“Listen b.itch if you don’t f.ucking give me back my weed. I swear I’m gonna kill you tonight.” Carnell said spitting in my face. I wiped my face and just laughed even more. “You can’t do any worse to me than you already have.” I said, with my eyes getting heavier. “You sure ‘bout that?” Carnell said as he let go of my blouse and let me drop back down to the floor. He walked away and I started to slowly crawl on the floor towards the kitchen. I thought he was gonna leave me alone as usual, but then he came back and grabbed me by my hair real tight and started dragging me across the floor, towards the bedroom.
I started crying and the tears were stinging my eyes. “Shut the f.uck up b.itch” Carnell said as he hit me for one last time...he then started ripping my clothes and put me on the bed. "Stop with the f.ucking crying and s.hit, coz I really don't give a f.uck" Carnell said without any regret, just anger. The room started spinning and everything started going dark...
My Mom is here so she won't let me write nemore coz she says I shuld be studyin'
so bumpz & comment a'ight!! Last edited by LaydeeLyca on Tue Aug 26, 2008 5:01 am; edited 9 times in total (Reason for editing : Grammar check.)
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Rizzo Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:51 pm
Come on where are the bumpzzz & comments at??! 
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
B5lover10 Mon Aug 11, 2008 1:34 pm
im sorry but it's too long for me to read right now lol
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Rizzo Mon Aug 11, 2008 1:35 pm
B5lover10 wrote:im sorry but it's too long for me to read right now lol
lolz I thought it was short but ok den I guess u can read it l8r.
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Alishia Tue Aug 12, 2008 4:42 am
ewww . carnell needs to be slapped around a bit. i hope she's alright. bump it girlie !
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Rizzo Tue Aug 12, 2008 8:36 am
yoface718x wrote:
i hope she's alright. bump it girlie !
lolz thanx 4 the bump and yeah he needs more than just a damn slap 4 doing all dat sh.it 2 her!!
...hopefully I can update 2day tho but my stomach really hurts & I got a headache too, but oh well I can still try 2 update.
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