Re: CH3RRY Pi3 - FiNiSH3D -

Alishia Fri Aug 22, 2008 3:31 pm

LaydeeLyca wrote:YAYYYY!! Glad I could HELP!! & ur welcome & dats good if u've got an idea. So ur gonna get 2 update soon right??

yeah ... it takes a long time for me to update anyways ... i should be done before tommorow morning ... : )

Rizzo Fri Aug 22, 2008 3:39 pm

yoface718x wrote:

yeah ... it takes a long time for me to update anyways ... i should be done before tommorow morning ... : )

ok den dats kool I guess I'll have 2 read it 2morrow morning though coz I gotta go soon coz I've extended my damn curfew by 30 minutes now...so I prolly gotta go in a few minutes.

B5lover10 Fri Aug 22, 2008 5:39 pm

BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rizzo Sat Aug 23, 2008 5:01 am

BUMPZZZZ IT ALISHIA!!

B5lover10 Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:48 pm

B5lover10 wrote:BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rizzo Sun Aug 24, 2008 4:58 am

LaydeeLyca wrote:BUMPZZZZ IT ALISHIA!!

Rizzo Sun Aug 24, 2008 1:07 pm

Yo Alishia where's da update @??

Alishia Sun Aug 24, 2008 1:39 pm

LaydeeLyca wrote:Yo Alishia where's da update @??

MY FRIENDS CAME OVER THE OTHER NIGHT AND I FORGOT ALL ABOUT UPDATING.. BUT I GOT SOME IDEAS ... I CANT UPDATE RIGHT NOW BUT THE NEXT TIME I GET ON I PROMISE THAT I WILL :)

Rizzo Sun Aug 24, 2008 1:56 pm

yoface718x wrote:

MY FRIENDS CAME OVER THE OTHER NIGHT AND I FORGOT ALL ABOUT UPDATING.. BUT I GOT SOME IDEAS ... I CANT UPDATE RIGHT NOW BUT THE NEXT TIME I GET ON I PROMISE THAT I WILL :)

ok that's kool...wel I'll update on Tuesday tho coz I have 2 update my other two stories on da official B5 forum 2morrow so I will upd8 "Black Widow" on Tuesday tho coz I gotta go to my friend's house on Wednesday coz I haven't hung out wit any of my friends since Wednesday tho...
newhoooo BUMPZZZ IT!!

B5lover10 Sun Aug 24, 2008 2:27 pm

B5lover10 wrote:BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alishia Mon Aug 25, 2008 1:35 am

hmmm well erm u could make something dramatic happen wit Rosie or Janice or Alishia. e.g Something happens between Rosie & Latrell or something doesn't happen coz Rosie doesn't let it happen. OR Uncle Mike hits Janice...OR Alishia & Carnell have a fight OR Alexis comes back to Dustin. OR something happens wit Bryan.

Character Introduced

CH3RRY Pi3 - FiNiSH3D - - Page 19 Charma11

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TW0 M0NTHS lAT3R

CARN3ll & AliSHiA

Alishia was in the kitchen cooking up a bunch of food because of her baby shower. It was kinda hard with her 9 month belly in the way, but she got it done. Across the kitchen table were greens, baked macaroni and cheese, corn bread, salad, fried chicken & fish and a white cake with pink white and yellow frosting.

All the girls were there. Well, all except Rosie and Alexis. Rosie, cause she's in New York and Alexis because no one had seen her in months. Janice, Tricia, Alishia, Jhene` from the shop, and cousin Charmaine who dropped in to check on everyone, were the only people in the apartment talking and having a good time.

"So, Alishia? Where's this tall caramel I been hearing so much for the last few months?" Cousin Charmaine asked. Everyone gave their attention to Alishia, who was in the kitchen, cooking in silent tears.

"Probably out that bitch I saw him with the other day." Alishia said only loud enough for herself to hear, or so she thought.

"Say what?" Charmaine screeched.

You see, Charmaine is the type of chick you don't mess with. Charmaine is Rosie's sister, and when push comes to shove, she any one's back. Especially her sister and cousins. That's what everyone loved about her, until you got on her bad side.

No answer had came from the kitchen. So, Charmaine repeated her self even louder, and sounded like Shanaynay. "I SAID 'SAY WHAT'?!"

Before Alishia could answer Carnell came through the door all smiles with his cousin Patrick and Cersha from the shop.

Cersha was 5'3" dark skinned and thick. She had short hair, like Nia Long and chinky hazel eyes. The ruby encrusted "C" from her chain sat prominently in the cleavage of her 32 C breasts. Her tight jeans hugged her thick thighs and round apple bottom perfectly and complimented her small build as if they were painted on.

Charmaine watched as they came in to the living room and made themselves comfortable on the couch. Carnell walked in the kitchen and tried to kiss Alishia on the lips but she turned her head to hide the fact that she was crying and he kissed her cheek. He payed no attention to her as he made his way back through the kitchen and to the bathroom. Charmaine got up and went in to the kitchen, bumping in to Carnell as she walked past.

"So that's him?" Charmaine asked. Alishia nodded her head and wiped her face with the back of her sleeve. "You want me to do anything to him? I could fuck him up for you. Watching a nigga cry always makes me laugh. You know--"

"I don't need you to do anything. I'll take care of it my self." Charmaine stood shocked at how the tone in her cousins voice went from sad to angry so quick. Alishia just shook her head as she saw Carnell come from the bathroom and go lean up against the wall and Cersha just made her self at home filing her nails on the couch. She grabbed the knife from the chopping block and basically went after Carnell. Not to harm him but to scare him at most.

"I saw you with that bitch!" Alishia screamed as tears poured down her face and she pointed at Carnell's chest. Carnell said not a word as it was a possibility that his life was endangered. He just stood there as Alishia cried and yelled. "What did I ever do to you to deserve that? I saw you! Kissing and hugging that bitch! What did she have that I didn't? I'm about to have your child. All I ever did was be your friend, your woman. THE FUCKING BEARER OF YOUR GODDAMNED CHILD! I didn't deserve this!" She huffed and cried in to her palms.

Cersha tried to slick and get up off the couch and leave. Charmaine pushed her back down on the couch. "Sit." Charmaine said to Cersha. Cersha did as she told and sat back down and crossed her arms and legs. Alishia put her hands down and in angry and pregnant waddle slash walk she made her way to Cersha.

"And YOU! I FUCKIN TRUSTED YOU! I THOUGHT YOU WERE MY FUCKING FRIEND!" Patrick quickly stood and grabbed Alishia before she could harm anyone. Janice sat at the kitchen table in shock the whole time. She'd never seen her sister act in a such a way. "HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME?! BOTH OF YOU!" Alishia looked at Carnell. "All I ever did was love you." She said with pleading and sorrowful eyes. Then, she looked at Cersha. "All I ever did was be your friend. Why would you do that to me?" She cried some more before throwing the knife across the room in Carnell's direction. It just missed his face and hit the corner of the wall, a quarter of an inch away from his head.

Everyone stood in shock at Alishia's insane actions. The room was hot and tense. "Get out." Alishia said to Carnell through gritted teeth. No one made a move or a sound. "Get out before I change my mind!" She yelled at Carnell. He made no hesitation and dipped out with Cersha right behind him. Patrick was still holding Alishia pretty tight, afraid to move. "Get off of me Patrick!"

Patrick finally let go and Alishia walked over to the the wall where the knife was and took it it out the wall. She dropped it to the floor and slid down the wall and just cried. Still. No one moved or said a word as she cried.

WHOOSHH! "FUCK! Not now! Is what Alishia said as water ran across the black tile floor. Then she cried out in pain.

"What's wrong cousin?" Charmaine asked.

"It's time." Alishia said. Everybody rushed around trying to help as Janice helped Alishia to her feet and then to the door. "Patrick , you know how to get to the hospital, right?" Alishia asked as they drove down the road. Then she cried out.

"What hospital? The nearest hospital is and hour away![/b]" Patrick yelled from the drivers seat.

"Ohh! I don't think I can wait that long! Pull over! This baby is coming now!" Alishia screamed.

"Fuck that! You ain't turning my backseat into a delivery room!" Patrick debated.

"We don't got no choice! Pull over!" She cried out again.

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30 minutes later Zyahn Brooklyn Breeding was born in the back seat of Patrick's black Honda Civic, while he threw up on the side of the road.

Janice called the ambulance so they could make sure everything was right with the baby.

More later.. computer keeps freezing Rolling Eyes

Rizzo Mon Aug 25, 2008 4:37 am

*eyes burning red with rage* OH HELLLLLLLLL 2 THE MUTHAF.UCKING NAWWW!! grrrrrrrr just when I decided 2 trust Carnell & not wanna chop his damn big ol' head off, THEN he goes & CHEATS on Alishia.
...words can't even f.ucking explain how ANGRY I am right now!! why da f.uck is he cheating wit dat short lil b.itch goshhh I bet she ugly too & her damn breasts ain't dat big, heck even I got bigger ones than those
yep yep DATS MY SISTER!! She ain't da kinda girl dat u wanna mess wit & damnnnn Alishia I never knew u could get dat angry lolz but 4realz tho u should've let Charmaine throw ANOTHER knive at his big head & I'm SURE she wouldn't miss @ all.
why da f.uck is dat dumb b.itch Cersha or w/e her damn name is tryna make herself @ home & den try 2 leave too, nuh-uh b.itch our fam don't let h.oes like u get away dat easily!!...YAYYYYY dats right cuz, kick dat no good 4 nuthing sh.ithead liar 2 get da f.uck out of dere & NEVER bring his dumba.ss back again or ELSE I will hunt him down & kill HIM!
lmfao awwwwww dats such a nice nameee awwww so sweet lolz she was born in Patrick's car hahahhahaha he's throwin' up too omdzzz dats funny haaha
BUMPZZZZZ IT ALISHIA!! (sorry I wrote too damn much but I just had a lot 2 say)

Rizzo Mon Aug 25, 2008 4:41 am

YAYYYYY you kinda used one of my ideas 4 the update whooo hoooooo lolz ...grrr I h8 it when computers freeze, it really gets on my damn nerves, sooooo I guess u can update later tho right??
BUMPZZZZ IT .

Rizzo Mon Aug 25, 2008 4:42 am

LaydeeLyca wrote:*sings* baby turn around & let me see that next update so we can BUMP BUMP BUMP!! that is all I wanna reeeead so baby show meee! lol

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Rizzo Mon Aug 25, 2008 4:42 am

LaydeeLyca wrote:*sings* baby turn around & let me see that next update so we can BUMP BUMP BUMP!! that is all I wanna reeeead so baby show meee! lol

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Rizzo Mon Aug 25, 2008 4:44 am

BUMPPPPPP IT!

Rizzo Mon Aug 25, 2008 4:45 am

BUMP, BUMP, BUMP, BUMP IT UP!!

Alishia Mon Aug 25, 2008 2:00 pm

rosie i'm still using your ideas it's just that i have to restart the computer it's still freezing... but keep bumping i'll update in a bit Very Happy

Rizzo Mon Aug 25, 2008 2:04 pm

yoface718x wrote:rosie i'm still using your ideas it's just that i have to restart the computer it's still freezing... but keep bumping i'll update in a bit

yayyyy ok Lisha!! BUMPSSSSS!!

Rizzo Mon Aug 25, 2008 2:04 pm

LaydeeLyca wrote:BUMPPPPPP IT!

Rizzo Mon Aug 25, 2008 2:07 pm

LaydeeLyca wrote:
BUMP, BUMP, BUMP, BUMP IT UP!!

...hmmm

maybe Carnell didn't REALLY kiss dat b.itch, maybe SHE kissed him & was all over him but he didn't want dat but it was too late & Alishia had already seen it coz dat b.itch had it planned all along so dat Alishia & Carnell would break up or sumthing. & altho I don't really like Nellz in dis story, I still think dat he needs a chance 2 explain himself.

Rizzo Mon Aug 25, 2008 2:08 pm

LaydeeLyca wrote:
BUMP, BUMP, BUMP, BUMP IT UP!!

B5lover10 Mon Aug 25, 2008 2:46 pm

ummmm

yeah uh no comment on theat whole fight .

actally NO i got a few things to say;

ALISHA DID THE BLACK THING SHE GRABBED HERSELFA KNIFE THT'S HOW YOU DO IT GURL !

AN CARNELL SHOULDA BEEN SCARED CUZ IF IT WAS ME I WOULDA SLICED AN DICED HIS SEXY ASS !.....lmao

but haha Patrick threw up i woulda too shoot if i had to witness some shit like that....lol

BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alishia Tue Aug 26, 2008 3:52 am

DUSTiN

I was on the couch with the boys. We were watching BET NOW. They gotten so big over the last eight months. Treshaun can walk and Tyrell can talk, alot. Not real words but he thinks he saying stuff. My favorite word that he says is Daddy. Makes me feel like I accomplished something. Cool

RIIIING ! RIIIING ! I picked up the phone and answered. "Hello?" There was no answer. So I waited before saying something again. "I said, HELLO?!" No answer I was about to hang up when the person spoke.

"Don't hang up!" The person said. It took a minute but I figured out who it was.

"Alexis?" I questioned.

"Hey baby." She said. I was stuck I didn't really know what to say.

"Don't 'Hey Baby' me now. You put me through hell for the last eight months! You missed so much of what these boys have went through. They can walk and talk and you missed all that." I said to her.

"Dustin I'm sorry. I just wanted to let you know that I was coming back. I want to be there for my kids. If you open the door I can truly apologize to you." It sounded like she had been crying. But I had no time for tears. She should have been worried about what was going on when she wrongfully accused me of cheating all those months ago.

"I can't do that. You hurt me real bad Alexis. I can't let you in again. How do I know you won't leave like that again? Or that we'll fight like that again?" I questioned.

"No one said I could guarantee that it will be the same as before. Just open the door. Let's talk about this on the inside." I hesitated for a second before hanging up the phone. I got up and walked to the door and opened it. There she was. She had on a jacket and some real tall black boots. Her hair was curly and she had changed the color to black. It looked nice though. She opened up the jacket to reveal black lace underwear and a matching bra.

"Happy Valentines day." She said coming in the apartment and then she kissed me passionately, as if nothing had changed.

jANiC3

"Wow Patrick! Can you believe it! A baby on Valentines day! My niece is sooo cute! She looks like Carnell but just a girl." I rambled on and on for a few good minutes before Patrick interrupted me.

"JANICE! I get it. She's cute." He smiled reassuringly and rubbed my back. "My freakin' car though. Was it necessary to give birth in my car? I know things like that can't wait. But I think she could have waited until we got here." He laughed a little bit and looked around the waiting room of the hospital.

"You think she's alright?" He asked.

I just shrugged my shoulders and sighed. "I don't know. The doctors didn't let me see her yet." My cousin Charmaine sighed deeply and ran her hands over her face. "CC, she'll be fine. Don't worry." I tried to console her. But I couldn't even convince myself that my sister would be alright. When we got to the hospital, the doctors said Alishia had complications during birth and slipped in to a coma shortly after they had arrived. We all basically sat on our hands in the waiting room, wondering if she would be alright.

I heard footsteps approaching us and figured it was the doctor. I looked up and it was the last person I wanted to see.

"Carnell, right?" Charmaine said. He just nodded and looked at me and Patrick.

"How's she doing?" He asked. I know his intentions were sincere but I really didn't want him here.

"What the fuck are you doing here Carnell?" I asked in a angry tone.

"I came to see how Alishia was. Patrick told me--" I cut him off before he could finish his sentence.

"Why would you do that Patrick? I told you I didn't want him here!" I tried not to yell to respect the hospital. But Patrick disrespected my wish and let his trifling cousin waltz up into this hospital like that shit didn't even happen this evening.

"Janice, what you heard isn't what happened. If you just let me explain." He said to me but I didn't want to hear it. What I heard this evening was enough.

"Yo Carnell. I don't care. Just go away. My sister don't need you and neither do the rest of us. Just go home." He looked at me with sad eyes, then he just got up and left. I didn't care. He was part of the reason why my sisters in this stupid ass hospital now.

The doctor had finally came back from my sisters room.

"Is she okay?" I asked. He looked up us and took his gloves.

"I'm sorry, but .... "

CHARMAiN3

After that Carnell dude had left the room I saw that he didn't leave for the exit. But instead he went the other way, towards the nursery. I got up and followed him. He was standing at the window looking at all the newborns. I put my hand on his shoulder.

"I'm sorry about my cousin." I said to him. I guess the sound of my voice had startled him because he jumped. He wiped his face and looked down at me.

"It's alright. I understand." He turned his head back towards the window.

"You know which one is yours?" I asked. I didn't want to be portrayed as the bad guy this time. Maybe he'll explain himself in time.

"The little yellow girl in the middle." He said. I looked at the baby. She did kinda look like him, but that baby is only a few hours old.

"How can you be so sure?" I asked.

"Her name. I know name from anywhere." He said quietly. He put his hand up to the window and dropped his head. "You know, I been through hell and back to get with her. I wouldn't ruin that for anything." I was confused. I just gave him a funny stare.

"She was gonna have my baby and maybe even be my wife one day. I love her and she thinks I would kill our friendship for that nasty girl from the shop. I would never touch that girl. Every man from here to fuckin' Chicago done ran in that girl. We were just talking at the park the other day. He sighed and looked back through the window. "I almost punched that bitch for kissing me. But she knew that if Alishia saw, some shit like this would happen." Then he kinda laughed. He turned his head and faced me. "You should have seen what she tried to do when your cousin kicked me out earlier." He moved away from the window.

"I'm not the person you need to be telling this to." I said. He just shook his head and walked away. I took another look at the baby and then looked at that Carnell dude again. I ran up behind him and grabbed his arm. He stopped and looked at me. "Let my cousin know." He gave me a funky look.

"Janice? I don't think so." He tried to pull away but I pulled him back.

"No. Let Alishia know. When they let people go in and see her. Let her know. Besides I'm sure the only person she'll want to know anything from is you." I smiled to reassure him that everything would work out. My little speech didn't work because he just walked away. My smile faded and I just walked back to the waiting room and saw the doctor leave.

I ran over to Janice and her man Patrick. "What did he say?

Alishia Tue Aug 26, 2008 3:59 am

AFTER A FEW MORE UPDATES THIS STORY WILL BE ENDING..
SO PLEASE BUMP IT UP AND THEN I WILL START A PART TWO..

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