Re: ~confused~chpt 3 pg4

B5lover10 Fri May 16, 2008 1:21 pm

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~Mrz.$exi~ Sun May 18, 2008 6:24 pm

sorry i haven't updated!! it comming in a min!

B5lover10 Sun May 18, 2008 7:11 pm

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Rizzo Fri May 23, 2008 1:55 pm

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~Mrz.$exi~ Thu May 29, 2008 7:50 pm

Chapter 2

once yall stopped laughing you turned around and entered there house.
you walk into there house and it is huge on the inside. i mean like bigger than your house.
the first thing you see is this huge crystal chandalier[sp]

*Y/N P.O.V.*
wow they got a big ol house. i wonder where i will sleep to night?

*END OF P.O.V.*

m/v-and who is this fine young shawty right here?

you turn around to look and see a boy that looks almost as good as the rest of them did.

mamma b-dustin back off. she is way to young for you!

dustin-well she look like she around 19

y/n- hi dustin, i'm y/n, and no i'm only 15

dustin- *damn ma, shawty got a BANGIN body for a 15 yr old* well just call me DIZZY D! and i guess i'm out*since ain't nobody in here my age range!!*

i could tell he left because wasn't nobody in his age range.

mamma b- well since the guest room is our exercise room i guess you will be stayin in Carnell's room

y/n- but how in the world am i gonna sleep in his room

m/v-yea how is she gonna sleep in my room???

i turned around to carnell standing there with his arms crossed and a mad expression on his face. and he was still wearing what he had on when he brought the fruit cake to my house. barely any thing.

Carnell P.O.V.

i was confused how in the world was she gonna sleep in MY room. it is my room!!

mamma b- well Carnell you are gonna sleep in Bryan's room with him!

bry-nope, that big behind pig and sleepin with me!!!

carnell-boy shutup

i looked at y/n from the corner of my eye and saw her just starin at me up and down and bitin her lip at the same time. if that didn't turn me on i
don't know what could.

mamma b-both of yall shut up the rest of your brothers are trying to sleep! now carnell you are sleeping in Bryan's room and thats final is that clear?

at that point she was lookin like she was demonised and scared us shi.tless.

e/b-mam' yes mam'

mamma b-thats more like it. now Carnell please show y/n to your room.

carnell- yes mam'

Carnell's P.O.V.
she just stood there still lookin scared as hell,but at the same time lookin sexi too! all i could do was lick my lips while i undressed her with my eyes. she had on a pink baby tee that had hand prints on them and said "can't touch this". and some matching pink booty shorts.
after my mom had her little "rampage" she left storming to her room like a little 5 year old.

y/n-what are you lookin at??

nell-what.... oh nothin.

Y/N's P.O.V.
i couldn't tell what he was doin exactly. but all i could see was that he was starin at me like crazi!and then he licked those lusicous lips of his which made me hot or was it just the room that we were in.

nell-so... i guess i should show you to my room now huh?

y/n-i guess u should.

he lead me down a long hallway and up a staircase that looked like it lead to an attic.

nell- so here is my room*opening the door. and watching her a.ss while she walked in my room.*

y/n-wow.... this room is bigger than mine.

i turned around to see he was lookin at me up and down over and over. and then he just had to lick his lips again!!!

y/n-do you have some sorta eye problem?

nell-naw you just very distracting thats all*lickin lips*

y/n-oh. i know i can be.*biting lip*

he got closer to me and grabbed me by my a.ss

nell-i wanna do so many things to you right now.

y/n-to bad

i tried to back up but his grip was to tight so i couldn't move. all of a sudden i saw somebody behind him......

thanks for the bumps girls!!

who is it behind him.......

bumps!

B5lover10 Sun Jun 01, 2008 12:34 pm

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Rizzo Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:53 am

OH MY ERM WOW wat a great update lol...BUMP IT UP CHICA!

B5lover10 Mon Jun 02, 2008 2:08 pm

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Rizzo Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:47 pm

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B5lover10 Fri Jun 20, 2008 1:13 pm

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Rizzo Sun Jul 06, 2008 6:02 am

BUMPZ CHICA! COME ON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! lolz

B5lover10 Sun Jul 06, 2008 12:31 pm

trust me she's not updating she moved it to another forum!

Rizzo Sun Jul 06, 2008 1:09 pm

B5lover10 wrote:trust me she's not updating she moved it to another forum!

Oh ok well dat sucks den lolz! She could've AT LEAST let us know that she won't update tho goshhh. do u know which forum she moved it 2 tho??

B5lover10 Sun Jul 06, 2008 1:15 pm

LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:trust me she's not updating she moved it to another forum!

Oh ok well dat sucks den lolz! She could've AT LEAST let us know that she won't update tho goshhh. do u know which forum she moved it 2 tho??

yupp cuz im not it it's right here;

http://thenewb5online.forumup.com/viewtopic.php?p=116723&mforum=thenewb5online#116723

well thaat's my story but still that's the forum!

Rizzo Sun Jul 06, 2008 1:18 pm

B5lover10 wrote:
LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:trust me she's not updating she moved it to another forum!

Oh ok well dat sucks den lolz! She could've AT LEAST let us know that she won't update tho goshhh. do u know which forum she moved it 2 tho??

yupp cuz im not it it's right here;

http://thenewb5online.forumup.com/viewtopic.php?p=116723&mforum=thenewb5online#116723

well thaat's my story but still that's the forum!

A'ight well I'll bump it but I'll read it l8r coz I'm readin' ur other stories on da official forum tho!

~Mrz.$exi~ Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:41 pm

LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:
LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:trust me she's not updating she moved it to another forum!

Oh ok well dat sucks den lolz! She could've AT LEAST let us know that she won't update tho goshhh. do u know which forum she moved it 2 tho??

yupp cuz im not it it's right here;

http://thenewb5online.forumup.com/viewtopic.php?p=116723&mforum=thenewb5online#116723

well thaat's my story but still that's the forum!

A'ight well I'll bump it but I'll read it l8r coz I'm readin' ur other stories on da official forum tho!

soooo sorry i haven't updated but imma bout to update ok!!!

Rizzo Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:45 pm

[quote="~Mrz.~"][quote="LaydeeLyca"][quote="B5lover10"]

LaydeeLyca wrote:
B5lover10 wrote:trust me she's not updating she moved it to another forum!

soooo sorry i haven't updated but imma bout to update ok!!!

A'ight dats good! It's ok tho but we were just wondering what happened with the story dats all but I'm glad ur gonna update! SOOOO BIG BUMPZZZ!

Rizzo Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:47 pm

YAYY I GOT U 2 A NEW PAGE lolz!

B5lover10 Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:48 pm

BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Mrz.$exi~ Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:53 pm

Chapter 3

Dustin's P.O.V.
after easdropping on moms little weekly "rampage" i decided to see what Nell was doing. as i started to get closer to the stairs to lead to his room i heard, " i want to do so many things to you right now" or some thing like that!!
hold up its her first day here and he already bout to tap dat? :? dat my brother! Very Happy

i crept up the stairs but probably didn't do it quiet enough!! because y/n heard me and just stared at me,

dizzy-oooo, imma tell mamma.

nell-man, wtf you doin in my damn room?*still hold in her a.ss*

dizzy-obviously watchin you draw blood from her ass!!

nell-ay man shut up.

y/n- but seriously though let go!!*i tore his hands from my butt*

Y/N's P.O.V.

dizzy-i'm still tellin mamma

y/n-no you won't

dizzy-watch me!!

y/n-do it and i will tell her somethin that you did that she don't know about!!

dizzy- :? and what would that be, u don't even know me to have dirt on me!!!

y/n-oh i know you better than you think i do! you know your girlfriend's bestfriend right.

dizzy- yea, YazzyPooh. :?

y/n-yea, well Yazmine is my brother's girlfriend and your girlfriend tells Yazmine everything as you know about you, and she tells me!!! Very Happy

dizzy-you wouldn't dare!!! Shocked

y/n-oh yea i would!! it's a small world ain't it Dustin!!

dizzy-my momma won't believe you!!

i turned and saw Nell just sitting there enjoyin the whole fight!!!

y/n-oh really now. who would she believe.a sweet lil angel(points to self) me, her bestfriends daughter that she has almost raised half of her life, and that has never lied her whole life, Very Happy

or the devil himself Twisted Evil

(points finger) you, who has soo many secrects and has lied sooo many times in his own mother's face???

dizzy- Surprised

:? why don't we just see.....

we both took off running and then out of no where the impossible happened!!!

KELLY'S P.O.V

d.amn man its like sooo boring in here. i thought to myself. my phone rung.

kellz-hello

f/v-hey boo whats up??

kellz-oh. hey baby! wat u doin?...........................
hello?hello? :?

i guess the coverage was lost. then all of a sudden i heard a lot of commotion on out side my room. i looked out to see a big a.ss head comming my way then falling on the floor"BAMMM"

Y/N'S P.O.V.

we were running down the hallway then all of a sudden big head w/ braids stuck his head out a door making the original big head fall straight on his big a.ss!!

dizzy-aww shi.t Mad

e/b-haaaa

dizzy-man that ain't funny!!! Evil or Very Mad

kellz-yea it was, and thats what yo a.ss get for running in the house. and knowin mamma told u not to!!! Very Happy

y/n-thats what yo 2 timin, botty lickin, d.ick suckin a.ss get!!! Twisted Evil

e/b-

what!!!

y/n-what yall lookin at, OMG, Dizzy!!!

dizzy-wtf you want girl

y/n- Imma bout to tell yo mamma!!!!

dizzy- no you ain't!!!1 Shocked

y/n-yea i am!!! Twisted Evil

i took off runing down the hallway TRIEING to find my way to Mamma B.i turned around and saw all of them following me and i heard Dustin yell don't you dare i'll get you if you do!!!
all i did was reply by simply sayin-wow your very scary, and i'd like to see you try to touch me!!!

i stoped running because i had ran into somebody!!!then the rest of them ran into me after i stopped

y/n-owww Mad

*in a low mutter*

p/v-all of yall bout to be in trouble now!!!

who is it.................
bumps so i can update!!

Rizzo Fri Jul 11, 2008 3:00 pm

WOW good update & dat was funny ahhaahaha & hmmm I think it's prolly Patrick tho 4 some reason but dats just a guess! I wonder who Kelly was talkin' 2 & what happened how comes he was cut off tho BUMPZZ IT CHICA!

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