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Black Widow chpt 15 pg 23...UPDATED!!
Rizzo Sun Jul 06, 2008 6:00 am
Intro:
Life changes with every step, you can't take back what you have done. But you always wish you could. You've got everything you want in life, friends, family and a boyfriend and yet you like to pounce on prey and destroy others happiness...just like a Black Widow.
BUMP IT UP Y'ALL!
Links for chapters:
Chapter 1 ~ The Drama Unfolds~
Chapter 2 ~ Loss Of Hope~
Chapter 3 ~ A Broken Heart~
Chapter 4 ~ Confusion~
Chapter 5 ~ Revealing the truth~
Chapter 6 ~ Thoughts of Escaping from Hell~
Chapter 7 ~ Love and Confusion~
Chapter 8 ~ Change of Plans~
Chapter 9 ~ A New Romance?~
Chapter 10 ~Conflicts~
Chapter 11 ~Affection PART 1~
Chapter 11 ~Affection PART 2~
Chapter 12 ~Business and Associations~
Chapter 13 ~Mixed Emotions~
Chapter 14 ~Shocked~
Chapter 15 ~Compassion~
Chapter 16 ~New Arrival~
THE LINKS ARE ABOVE THIS TEXT BUT THEY ARE TRANSPARENT!!
Life changes with every step, you can't take back what you have done. But you always wish you could. You've got everything you want in life, friends, family and a boyfriend and yet you like to pounce on prey and destroy others happiness...just like a Black Widow.
BUMP IT UP Y'ALL!
Links for chapters:
Chapter 1 ~ The Drama Unfolds~
Chapter 2 ~ Loss Of Hope~
Chapter 3 ~ A Broken Heart~
Chapter 4 ~ Confusion~
Chapter 5 ~ Revealing the truth~
Chapter 6 ~ Thoughts of Escaping from Hell~
Chapter 7 ~ Love and Confusion~
Chapter 8 ~ Change of Plans~
Chapter 9 ~ A New Romance?~
Chapter 10 ~Conflicts~
Chapter 11 ~Affection PART 1~
Chapter 11 ~Affection PART 2~
Chapter 12 ~Business and Associations~
Chapter 13 ~Mixed Emotions~
Chapter 14 ~Shocked~
Chapter 15 ~Compassion~
Chapter 16 ~New Arrival~
THE LINKS ARE ABOVE THIS TEXT BUT THEY ARE TRANSPARENT!!
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Alishia Sun Jul 06, 2008 2:41 pm
oh boy .
sounds real interesting .
bumps !
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Rizzo Sun Jul 06, 2008 2:42 pm
lilc_o9 wrote:
oh boy .
sounds real interesting .
bumps !
Thanx! Glad u like it...I'ma update it 2morrow coz I gotta go 2 sleep soon coz it's nearly 10 pm here in London & I still got skool 2 go 2!...but keep da bumpz coming!
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Alishia Sun Jul 06, 2008 2:49 pm
LaydeeLyca wrote:lilc_o9 wrote:
oh boy .
sounds real interesting .
bumps !
Thanx! Glad u like it...I'ma update it 2morrow coz I gotta go 2 sleep soon coz it's nearly 10 pm here in London & I still got skool 2 go 2!...but keep da bumpz coming!
10pm ?!
lol good night !!!
bumps ! [ again ]
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Rizzo Sun Jul 06, 2008 2:50 pm
lilc_o9 wrote:LaydeeLyca wrote:lilc_o9 wrote:
oh boy .
sounds real interesting .
bumps !
Thanx! Glad u like it...I'ma update it 2morrow coz I gotta go 2 sleep soon coz it's nearly 10 pm here in London & I still got skool 2 go 2!...but keep da bumpz coming!
10pm ?!
lol good night !!!
bumps ! [ again ]
lolz yep dere is only a few mins left until it's 10 pm! ok nite nite lolz
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Rizzo Wed Jul 09, 2008 10:44 am
I'll update dis as soon as I can ok...hopefully just in a few hours tho! Da first chapter will be VERY dramatic tho!...so keep da bumpz coming!
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Rizzo Sat Jul 12, 2008 6:09 am
I'll update dis as soon as I get home 2day from shopping coz I gotta go get some new clothes tho but I've already written da update tho I just need 2 edit and post it ok! BUT THANX 4 ALL DA BUMPZ THO!
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Alishia Sat Jul 12, 2008 5:56 pm
yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:bumps !
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Rizzo Sun Jul 13, 2008 4:15 am
Chapter 1 ~ The Drama Unfolds~
The street lights dimmed as it got closer to midnight. It was usually the time when it got unsafe to be standing around. It was a dark, cold night. Gloria couldn't see clearly without her glasses. Everything appeared to her as a blur. This meant that Gloria was lost and confused. She took a left turn straight into an alleyway. This wasn't a good decision to make. Gloria had a knife in her pocket.
Next thing she knew, there was blood all over the knife and her hands. She couldn't believe what had just happened to her. She started to walk down the street, and heard some footsteps behind her, then she started walking faster. She turned around and saw no one there. She ran home and on her way there she bumped into her best friend Dustin and he offered to drive her home.
Gloria and Dustin got to her house and then she slammed the front door shut and locked it too coz she was paranoid and thought someone was following her. Dustin escorted her to her room. They got in and Gloria clutched her knife tightly, as she slid down to the ground. Everything in her perfect life had changed, her perfect record too, she didn't want to go to prison.
She picked up herself off the floor and made her way to her bed, which Dustin was sitting on. With every step she took, flash backs of the last few hours, burst into her head like raindrops falling. If only she wouldn't have gone back there, but her conscience had told her to keep running, but Gloria had grown to know not to trust her conscience.
Suddenly, she heard the telephone ring. It went straight to the answering machine. All that could be heard, was someone breathing heavily. "It's not over Gloria" A deep, harsh voice suddenly spoke out ... "There's no where to hide"....
Who was it that just called Gloria??
BUMPZ AND COMMENTS 2 FIND OUT MORE!!
The street lights dimmed as it got closer to midnight. It was usually the time when it got unsafe to be standing around. It was a dark, cold night. Gloria couldn't see clearly without her glasses. Everything appeared to her as a blur. This meant that Gloria was lost and confused. She took a left turn straight into an alleyway. This wasn't a good decision to make. Gloria had a knife in her pocket.
Next thing she knew, there was blood all over the knife and her hands. She couldn't believe what had just happened to her. She started to walk down the street, and heard some footsteps behind her, then she started walking faster. She turned around and saw no one there. She ran home and on her way there she bumped into her best friend Dustin and he offered to drive her home.
Gloria and Dustin got to her house and then she slammed the front door shut and locked it too coz she was paranoid and thought someone was following her. Dustin escorted her to her room. They got in and Gloria clutched her knife tightly, as she slid down to the ground. Everything in her perfect life had changed, her perfect record too, she didn't want to go to prison.
She picked up herself off the floor and made her way to her bed, which Dustin was sitting on. With every step she took, flash backs of the last few hours, burst into her head like raindrops falling. If only she wouldn't have gone back there, but her conscience had told her to keep running, but Gloria had grown to know not to trust her conscience.
Suddenly, she heard the telephone ring. It went straight to the answering machine. All that could be heard, was someone breathing heavily. "It's not over Gloria" A deep, harsh voice suddenly spoke out ... "There's no where to hide"....
Who was it that just called Gloria??
BUMPZ AND COMMENTS 2 FIND OUT MORE!!
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
B5lover10 Sun Jul 13, 2008 12:14 pm
i like it!
BUMPz!!!!!!!!!
BUMPz!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Rizzo Sun Jul 13, 2008 12:16 pm
B5lover10 wrote:i like it!
BUMPz!!!!!!!!!
Glad u like it!
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Rizzo Sun Jul 13, 2008 12:21 pm
Thanx 4 all da bumpz but I am too busy 2 update at da moment coz I still gotta do my English homework coz it takes a long time lolz and also I gotta eat my dinner now coz it's 7 sumthing here in da UK & after dat I gotta wash my hair coz it feels too damn greasy & now it's gone all curly and I prefer it straight tho lolz
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Rizzo Sun Jul 13, 2008 12:21 pm
oh yeah & thanx 4 gettin' me 2 a new page tho!
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Alishia Sun Jul 13, 2008 3:37 pm
woah.that sounds really scary.
bumps!
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Alishia Sun Jul 13, 2008 4:18 pm
B5lover10 wrote:BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!
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B5lover10 Sun Jul 13, 2008 4:30 pm
yoface718x wrote:B5lover10 wrote:BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!
Alisha when you gonna update your story?
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
Alishia Sun Jul 13, 2008 4:40 pm
B5lover10 wrote:yoface718x wrote:B5lover10 wrote:BUMPz!!!!!!!!!!
Alisha when you gonna update your story?
im doing it now
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Re: Black Widow chpt 16 pg 24...UPDATED!!
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