New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
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Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:bumps!
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:bumps!
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
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Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
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Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
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Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
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Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:bumps!
didn't really feel like typing that 15 times....
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[update! )
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
*Aaliyah's point of view*
-End of the day-
(I was walking out the school to go too my car when I heard someone calling my name I turned around to see who it was and it was Patrick)
Aaliyah-yeah?
Patrick-hey um I was wondering this friday everyone's going to the bowling alley it's kinda like a hangout place do you wanna go?
Aaliyah-what would Tiffany say about that?
Patrick-don't know we'll find out when you get there.
Aaliyah-ill think about it.
Patrick-ok ...can I get your number?
Aaliyah-phone.
Patrick-huh?
Aaliyah-give me your phone.
Patrick-ohhh (he took his phone out and gave it to me I put in my number and put my name with a smiley then I gave it back to him he looked at it and smiled then I whispered in his ear)
Aaliyah-call me
Patrick-o ...o ...okay
Aaliyah-so, ill have your number (I laughed then got in my car and drove away)
*Patrick's point of view*
(I felt really stupid; I turned around and saw Tiffany waiting for me)
Tiffany-come on Patrick let's go
Patrick-im coming damn (I said walking over to her man sometimes I don't even know why im with her)
(When I got in the car it was 21questions with her)
Tiffany-so, what was that about? why did she have your phone? what's going on with you Patrick? can you answer me?
Patrick-maybe if you shut tha f*ck I could actually answer some of your damn questions!
Tiffany-excuse me your not talking to me like that !
Patrick- (sigh)
(then we arrived at Tiffany's house)
Tiffany-call me tonight ok?
Patrick-whatever
Tiffany-Patrick!
Patrick-okay I will damn!
Tiffany-f*ck you Patrick!
(she was really getting on my nerves I got out the car)
Patrick-im getting tired of you Tiffany always got something to say(I said getting in her face then her eye's started to water and she look like she was about to cry)
Patrick- (sigh) look Tiff im sorry alright?
Tiffany- .......
Patrick-im sorry ...I love you (I said pulling her in for a hug) do you forgive me?
Tiffany-mhmm ...
Patrick-can I have a kiss? (she looked up at me and I grabbed her chin and kissed her on the lips very softly she put her arms around my neck then we really started getting into the kiss i mean tounge action baby [lol] then she broke the kiss)
Tiffany-alright I gotta get inside.
Patrick-a'ight ill call you
Tiffany-ok.
(I leaned in and gave her another kiss then she went inside then I got back in my car and drove home. When I got there I went straight to my room, and fell on my bed then my sidekick started to vibrate it was a text message from "Aaliyah")
Aaliyah -ill go to tha bowling alley friday just tell me what time.
Patrick-hey, it's at 7 do you want to come with me and Tiffany?
Lysa:)-no ima go with Chante'.
Patrick-ok
(The thing about this is when I talk to Aaliyah it's like I forget I have a girlfriend but when it's me and Tiffany and she's not complaining I wonder why I would even wanna break up with her; it's confusing)
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Patrick is a mess.
I know !
lmfaooo.
But, yeahhh I updated.
I want comments and bumpz. =)
And if you get me to page 5 ill updateee again.
I meannn i got these updates ready. well the next few updates.
Aha.
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
patrick is a big baby
"can i have a kiss"
>=P hmph
lol. but tiffany needs to stop buggin
she's really insecure and sensitive as hell
i hate girls like that!
PAGE 5 ?!?!?
are you going nuts!?!?!
lol jk but how bout i get you to page 4
and we call it a deal because i did JUST
get you to page 3....
"can i have a kiss"
>=P hmph
lol. but tiffany needs to stop buggin
she's really insecure and sensitive as hell
i hate girls like that!
PAGE 5 ?!?!?
are you going nuts!?!?!
lol jk but how bout i get you to page 4
and we call it a deal because i did JUST
get you to page 3....
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
yoface718x wrote:patrick is a big baby
"can i have a kiss"
>=P hmph
lol. but tiffany needs to stop buggin
she's really insecure and sensitive as hell
i hate girls like that!
PAGE 5 ?!?!?
are you going nuts!?!?!
lol jk but how bout i get you to page 4
and we call it a deal because i did JUST
get you to page 3....
lol, okayyy deal ! aha.
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
okay, i'll start bumping [continued quoting because i'm lazy) now
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:bumps!
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:bumps!
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:bumps!
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:bumps!
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:bumps!
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:bumps!
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:bumps!
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:bumps!
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:yoface718x wrote:bumps!
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Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
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Upatinggg now. =)
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
B5lover10 wrote:yoface718x wrote:
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Upatinggg now. =)
Re: New Story "She got it like that =)" Updated: 1.25.09
*Aaliyah's point of view*
-That friday-
(I was at home with Chante' getting ready so we could go to the bowling alley)
Chante'- you ready?
Aaliyah-yup
Chante'-alright let's go
(we got in my car and drove off to the bowling alley)
*Patrick's point of view*
Tiffany-Patrick(she said laughing)
Patrick-I was just showing you(I said smiling)
(then Aaliyah walked in looking hella sexy)
Patrick-hold on for a minute Tiff.(I said walking Aaliyah's way)
Patrick-hey Aaliyah ...Chante'
Aaliyah&Chante'-hey
Patrick-ya'll wanna go to the lane next to us?
Chante'-sure
Aaliyah-okay.
(I showed them where are lane was and they set up in the next one)
Tiffany-Patrick come here.
Patrick-yeah
Tiffany-what's she doing here?
Patrick-this is the schools hangout spot
Tiffany-but did YOU invite her?
Patrick-yes I did
Tiffany-why?
Patrick-because I did why do you ask so many questions?
Tiffany-cuz I feel like you have feelings for that girl.
Patrick- ......
Tiffany-Patrick do you?
Patrick-no
Tiffany-yes you do
Patrick-can we just play
Tiffany-im not doing sh*t with you(she said walking away)
(here we go again I followed her outside)
Tiffany-ever since that b*tch got here you stay acting weird around me
Patrick-Tiffany you get to jealous and quickly I don't question you when you talk to boys do I NO and this just really isn't working ...I wanna break up
Tiffany-WHAT?!
Patrick-I know you heard me I wanna break up alright ill drive you home after this but then you gonna have to start finding your own way(I said walking away, and she came back and went over somewhere else with some dude but I didn't give a sh*t I was sitting down when Aaliyah came over)
Aaliyah-hey Pat you ok?
Patrick-yeah ...I just broke up with Tiffany.
Aaliyah-what happend?
Patrick-cuz she's too jealous and im getting tired of her sh*t
*Aaliyah's point of view*
Aaliyah-come bowl with us then(I said getting up grabbing his hand)
(I saw him smile a bit then he got up)
Aaliyah-add Patrick's name.
Chante'-he can take my spot cuz Bryan is here and he wants me; ok lol but ya'll have funn !(she said walking away, that girl is a trip)
Patrick-I guess it's me and you
(I went to bowl and got 2 gutter bowls)
Patrick-haha you know you can't bowl right?
Aaliyah-I think we established that
Patrick-see just watch me maybe it'll help
(he went and I tried to do it in my next turn and still got one)
Patrick-here
(he said getting behind me putting one arm on my waiste and the other one on top of my hand which was on the ball then we threw it and I got a strike)
Aaliyah-I gott a strike ...I got a strike sad thing about it is you didn't get a strike and I can't bowl
Patrick-I basically did it for you
Aaliyah-sure(I said being sarcastic)
Patrick-whatever move(he said picking me up and sitting me down on the chair)
Aaliyah-you make me feel like a lil kidd(I said crossing my arms)
Patrick-well you sure don't look like one(he said smilng and sitting down beside me I bit my bottom lip then looked at him and I gazed into his eyes and he leaned in and I said)
Aaliyah-you have pretty eyes Patrick(I said laughing)
Patrick-haha Thank you(he said getting up to take his turn)
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It's gettinggg somewhere.
Ooooo, lol !
Hope you liking it Lisha.
Thanks for all the new pages and bumpz!
I want comments and bumpz. =)
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