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Post  Rizzo Thu Dec 25, 2008 1:41 pm

yoface718x wrote:
i think it's gloria that was "following" janice Laughing

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hope everything goes alright with rosie and kelly

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I'm writing the next upd8 ryte now, and hopefully I can post it 2day if I finish it 2day. & by the way the next upd8 will be my p.o.v & ur p.o.v ok. Smile
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Post  Alishia Thu Dec 25, 2008 1:52 pm

LaydeeLyca wrote:I'm writing the next upd8 ryte now, and hopefully I can post it 2day if I finish it 2day. & by the way the next upd8 will be my p.o.v & ur p.o.v ok. Smile

okay Smile
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Post  B5lover10 Thu Dec 25, 2008 2:50 pm

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Post  Alishia Thu Dec 25, 2008 4:21 pm

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Post  Alishia Thu Dec 25, 2008 4:48 pm

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Post  Alishia Thu Dec 25, 2008 10:36 pm

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Post  Alishia Thu Dec 25, 2008 10:52 pm

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Post  Alishia Thu Dec 25, 2008 11:34 pm

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Post  Rizzo Fri Dec 26, 2008 6:57 am

thanx 4 getting me 2 pg 20!! Very Happy
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Post  Rizzo Fri Dec 26, 2008 10:43 am

I'll DEFINITELY be able 2 upd8 2day ok, ORIGINALLY I was just gonna make it Rosie's[my] p.o.v & den Alishia's BUTTT NOW I will add Jan's p.o.v too!! Very Happy
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Post  B5lover10 Fri Dec 26, 2008 10:46 am

Your welcome Rosie. =)


whichever one of us got you to this pageee. lol



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Post  Alishia Fri Dec 26, 2008 1:39 pm

B5lover10 wrote:Your welcome Rosie. =)


whichever one of us got you to this pageee. lol



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Post  Alishia Fri Dec 26, 2008 3:51 pm

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Post  B5lover10 Sat Dec 27, 2008 9:06 am

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Post  Rizzo Sat Dec 27, 2008 10:19 am

I'm sorry that I didn't get 2 upd8 yesterday coz my Mom decided 2 do my hair again BUT I am tryna write some more and then I will upd8 2day, but I am trying my best coz I really don't feel good ryte now coz I got a really bad stomach ache. No pale
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Post  Rizzo Sat Dec 27, 2008 10:59 am

Chapter 13 ~Mixed Emotions~





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I opened the door and then Kelly turned his attention to me and he looked surprised to see me. He then pressed the intercom button to tell Jaiden something. “Yo Jaiden, take 5 coz we’ve been working all day.” he said, and then he removed his index finger from the button. He swung himself around 90 degrees clockwise to face me. I decided to walk over to him and he gestured for me to sit down in the seat in front of him.




I sat down and looked around the room at everything but him. There was an awkward silence for a while until we heard the door open and Jaiden came out of the recording booth. “Oh hey Rosie.” Jaiden said as he walked over to me, bent down slightly and gave me a hug. “Hey J. Long time, no see.” I said nonchalantly and then I giggled slightly. “Well I guess we’ve both been real busy, but since we’re taking a break, I might as well go get myself something to drink from upstairs. Do y’all want anything?” Jaiden said as he made his way towards the door.



I looked over at Kelly and he shook his head, then I turned my attention back to Jaiden. “We don’t want anything, but thanks for the offer.” I said whilst tapping my nails. Jaiden then looked at me and then looked at Kelly; he then shook his head whilst he exhaled. “Whatever problems y’all are having, you need to sort it out right now.” Jaiden said and then he walked out of the recording studio. “That’s exactly what I intend to do.” I mumbled as I twiddled my fingers, and then I started tapping my fingers. “Did you say something?” Kelly asked, but I didn’t reply. I just sat there inexpressive and then looked at him. “No, I haven’t exactly said anything to you in a while.” I responded.




“Rosie, is there something bothering you?” Kelly asked, and then he pulled my chair closer to his, so I was face to face with him. I turned my head to the left, but then he gently grabbed my chin and made me face him once again. “Answer me, is something bothering you? Is it because I’m away more?” he asked me. I almost felt like I was gonna cry, and I don’t know why coz I’m not usually this emotional, it must be the pregnancy that’s got me like this. Kelly held my right hand and squeezed it gently and then he smiled slightly, that made me feel a little better.




“It’s just that, when I found out I was pregnant and then I told you, you were overwhelmed with joy, but ever since you just changed. I mean, you’re just never at home and I just feel like we’re drifting apart. I just wanna know if- if there’s another girl that you’ve been seeing or something.” I said and then I started getting angry. “If you ARE seeing another girl, I SWEAR to God I will kill you AND her.” I said as I rose my voice and stood up and pointed my index finger at him.



Kelly just sat there with a shocked expression on his face, and then he started laughing. I didn’t understand what was so damn funny about what I said. “Why the hell are you laughing? This isn’t something to laugh about.” I said getting even angrier, I was so damn angry I could spit fire. Kelly then stood up and grabbed my shoulders and pushed me down gently into my chair. “You SERIOUSLY thought I was seeing another girl, WOW. Look, the only reason why I’ve been working so damn hard is because we are gonna have a baby, and we will obviously need more money coz we’re gonna need to buy lots of baby food and other baby stuff, so I’m just tryna prepare. I’m also tryna get something special, for my special girl.” Kelly said and then he grabbed both my hands but then I pulled my hands away from him.



“Special girl? What special girl, Kelly who is the b.itch that you talking about?” I said getting really frustrated, this fool thinks I’m joking, I’m serious as hell and he’s just laughing and talking shit about some ‘special girl’. “I’m talking about YOU. Rosie you mean more to me than any girl ever has, and now we share something special…you wanna know what that is?...You’re about to have MY baby, and that’s the most special thing that a couple could ever share and that’s something that I never wanna let go off, because I love you, AND our baby.” Kelly said and then he rubbed my stomach, I suddenly felt tears streaming down my cheeks. Kelly wiped away my tears with his thumb and then he kissed me passionately on my lips.





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Shad and I were so close to kissing, but then…his phone started ringing and then we looked at each other and moved apart. At first he seemed as if he didn’t wanna answer his phone, but then he looked at his phone and his expression was anger. He answered the call, and then he did nothing but yell “Yo, what the fuck do you want from me b.itch?” Shad said and then he sat there for a few seconds listening to what the person on the other end of the call was saying. Shad then started laughing and then he responded to what the person said “Naw, you just don’t get it do you? It’s never gonna be the same a’ight and I don’t EVER wanna see you ever again. So peace B.ITCH!” Shad said and then he dropped his phone on the couch.



I wasn’t sure if I should comfort him and not bother asking him what’s wrong or if I should ask him what’s wrong.












I’ll write more later, but right now I am feeling kinda worse than before but erm bump and comment please. THANX!!
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Post  Rizzo Sat Dec 27, 2008 3:37 pm

I'm gonna have 2 upd8 dis 2morrow ok coz I am feeling a little bit better now tho but I don't geel well enuf 2 write a proper upd8.
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Post  immy006 Sat Dec 27, 2008 3:39 pm

LMFAO
WOAAAH, Rosie's reaction ta kelly wuz sooo funny! She gettin all vex over nuttin ahahaha that wuz jokez, but then i guess he really hit the I love you wen he told her how he loved her so much, awww that wuz sweeet! i just hope everything continues to go welll for them.
&& i wander who that chick wuz, who wuz meant ta be interviewed.
Dammit i was totally looking forward to the chemistry wit Shad but noooo it had to be ruined, and oohh sound like he got 1 of those krazy exes. hahaha. BUMP THIS UP CHICA!


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Post  B5lover10 Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:23 pm

HOLD ON !


who the hell is Shad talking to?


And,when did Rosie and Kelly get downnn and busy? Neutral


When did rosie evennn become pregnant in this story? scratch




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Post  Alishia Sun Dec 28, 2008 7:27 pm

Shocked
rosie and shad are scary when their mad Embarassed Crying or Very sad
i'm goiong to get up and walk away now and let
scary mad shad calm down
but i was looking foward to that kiss.... Crying or Very sad
who ruined our moment?!?!?!?!

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